Jennafina

lol, thats awesome.

I agree about the descriptions. My favorite stanza is the last. You have a spare [/b] at the end of the page though.

It did sound like phantom of the opera, but it was different too. I really liked the first two stanzas.

Sorry. It's just, you don't hear it like that at all. Or maybe I'm just a pessimist. :p It's actually quite refreshing to hear it used in the original manor. ...

This is actually really old. I'm a little enbarrassed by it now. You people helped me get better than this. It was from when I first joined, like five months ...

I accidentally posted twice.

I like how each little idea is a part. My favorites are the first and last ones.

Wow, thats so funny! I was sure it was going to be depressing, but no! You fooled me aswell.

Wow. I like all the imagery. Your dad must be nice.

I have to say I like the rabits. They make me laugh. They're just so... Random! Swans are cool too. :lol:

Wow! Nice job! Some parts seem a wee bit forced, but apart from that, I really like it. Especially this. We had lost yet another game to Nature, who had ...

It seems really random.. Sort of like a dream! :)

Ok, I'm hooked on you're story. Some of the sarcasm seams forced, but apart from that its really captivating. Some parts do seam a little cliche, yes, but some of ...

That doesn't make sence at all for me. It just seamed like a bunch of obcene meaningless garble. It did whyme though, which is good. I did come though, even ...

I like how it flows, and the interesting imagery.