weird. dont like it though.
I like how each little idea is a part. My favorites are the first and last ones.
My mind goes with Bobo and Mr.Wallace.
For heaven's sake, WHY. I need to know WHY you don't like it. The fact that you don't doesn't help me in the least! And to that effect, Jenna, I need to know why you like the division of thoughts. Why are the first and last stanzas your favorite. The language? The construction? You happen to like beginnings and endings...
C'mon people. If we are ever going to be effective artists, we need to learn to review like artist.
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