Jennafina

Wow, thats really beautiful. Its like frost, or mist or somthing.

Your story is really discriptive and interesting. I cant wait for the next part! One thing though, how can eyes fold?

???? Wow, deapness. Thanks...?

^^^^^^^^ What she said.. Who says poetry has to make sence? And if you dont care, why bother? Its all for fun. :p

I really like all the imagry.. It makes a picture. Its a little long though, but its really good so thats ok. :p :)

I don't really understand what this is talking about, but I really like the words you use. It has a cool rythem and flow.

As an athiest, this cracks me up. Ive read enough of the bible to know that. The bible does say lord alot, doesn't it.. I also like the part about ...

Wow thats deap, it feals swirly, and mistical, and passionate. I like the little tiny peices of images.

Yay!! thanks!

Thanks for all the sugestions! This isn't HP fanfic, though.

Thats funny.. I like how you gave each sneeze scene a title at the end.

I Ageree, it sounds like the start of somthing.. Possibly a story? Or another verse?

I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS POEM!!! Sorry to wsound so vague, but Im not exactly sure what made me like it so much.. Its REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! :P

I like your poem, It would probably make more sense if I knew you though.. Its funny! :)

this doesn't really remind me of hostages in iraq, but I really really really like it. Its got a tence feal, and I think that it doesn't have to be ...