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Re: Fear
Wow, intense. Lol. I really liked it :D The only problem I found was this, "A landslide is coming down on top of me, brought down by me fear." Should ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: What Is Truly Real?
"When I think about thing all things"... That doesn't make sense :P Also, "I give these questions to you know", was know supposed now? Sorry, I'm just kind of picking ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: I shall walk a Thousand miles..
Well, here I am, ready to review... :) It was great, the bit of details and usage of metaphors really set it off. Although, the punctuation needs a little bit ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: If You Could See the World...
I agree with Rosie to a point. You should check for misspellings and take the time to review over your piece before submitting it. However, I have seen a few ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: Shattered Glass
Wow. That was simply beautiful. It reminded me a lot of my friend, who is going through some rough times of her own. In a way, I can actually feel ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: woman
Very nice. I enjoyed it. Simple, yet it says quite a bit. :)
Jul 4, 2012