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Re: No More
This is a really great optimistic poem, something different. I like how you are determined to take control of your life and live it to the fullest!
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Re: The Game... (Let me know what you think my poem means)
It is supposed to be separated every four lines.
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: "Eyes Lies"
This is a great poem! I can certainly relate to it. I have been disappointed by others far too many times. The way you ended it is very hopeful and ...
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Re: Simple Hello
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I interpreted it as you see the girl you love with another guy. In the end though you will not take her back because ...
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Re: Drowning
I love your poem! It reminds me of myself. The whole piece comes together so well! If you ever need someone to talk to you can message me.
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Re: I wish that you knew.
I like your poem. It shows that you still care and miss the other person. We all have disappointments in our life, but the future has so much to offer.
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Re: Language of the Eyes
Great poem, good use of metaphors keep up the good work.
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Re: What I have Become
I like it, I have actually been depressed for a few months now so I now how you fee. Anyways keep up the good work. (:
Oct 16, 2013