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Re: Halo: Hand of Eden
Dear neighbor, I appreciate your sticky note left on my front door! Allow me to drop my own on your doorstep! The format was weird, it was copy and pasted ...
May 4, 2020 -
Re: I Attempted Art
You completed art :3 I'm tempted to commission you but I have no idea what to ask for... scratch that, I know exactly what I want! But whenever you're comfortable ...
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Re: That One Day We were in Love
Thank you, thank you! I certainly enjoyed the encouragement! There tends to be a subtle bittersweet undertone in a lot of my writing, it's amazing how that can cause some ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: That One Day We were in Love
Ah, the joys of writing on no sleep! I've taken up writing again at work where I do 12-14 hour shifts so excuse the silly "than" mishap! Thank you for ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: Blue or Grey
I appreciate the feedback! Looking back, your corrections do set a more solid foundation and I'll need to keep an eye out for these type of mistakes! It really helps ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 1 - Highmark Academy
The one major set of feedback for this part is the tonal switch. The prelude should set the tone for what's to come, if you're trying to be orthodox. Despite ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: I wish I hadn’t wished away my time
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Apr 26, 2020
You did wonderful with your flow of ideas! Each section had a point and hit it! You're experiencing something most people get in college: that longing to have better spent ... -
Re: Black Box
It's nice to see it resonate with someone, reminds us we're not alone in these hardships. We all have our stories to tell and keep hidden away, I hope you're ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Black Box
I appreciate your kind words! I have always disliked formulaic stories so mine tend to be unorthodox somehow. Unfortunately, this is a one off piece. I like to write moments, ...
Apr 26, 2020
