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JenTep

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Halo: Hand of Eden

    Dear neighbor, I appreciate your sticky note left on my front door! Allow me to drop my own on your doorstep! The format was weird, it was copy and pasted ...

    May 4, 2020
  • Art » General, Other Re: I Attempted Art

    You completed art :3 I'm tempted to commission you but I have no idea what to ask for... scratch that, I know exactly what I want! But whenever you're comfortable ...

    May 3, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: That One Day We were in Love

    Thank you, thank you! I certainly enjoyed the encouragement! There tends to be a subtle bittersweet undertone in a lot of my writing, it's amazing how that can cause some ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: That One Day We were in Love

    Ah, the joys of writing on no sleep! I've taken up writing again at work where I do 12-14 hour shifts so excuse the silly "than" mishap! Thank you for ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Blue or Grey

    I appreciate the feedback! Looking back, your corrections do set a more solid foundation and I'll need to keep an eye out for these type of mistakes! It really helps ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: VALOR - Chapter 1 - Highmark Academy

    The one major set of feedback for this part is the tonal switch. The prelude should set the tone for what's to come, if you're trying to be orthodox. Despite ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Other, General Re: I wish I hadn’t wished away my time

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    You did wonderful with your flow of ideas! Each section had a point and hit it! You're experiencing something most people get in college: that longing to have better spent ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Black Box

    It's nice to see it resonate with someone, reminds us we're not alone in these hardships. We all have our stories to tell and keep hidden away, I hope you're ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Black Box

    I appreciate your kind words! I have always disliked formulaic stories so mine tend to be unorthodox somehow. Unfortunately, this is a one off piece. I like to write moments, ...

    Apr 26, 2020


The only person I know for certain I am better than is the person I used to be.
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