Jelly

I'm afraid that I'm not in the position to rate you on the accuracy of your portrayal, but I can say that I like this. It's great that you portray ...

Hi A. Time for review spam? Time for review spam! Overall: This is awesome. Let's just. Say it. Completely awesome. There are a lot of great lines I loved here ...

Hi! This is quite a nice poem. Overall: You write some very pretty images in very short lines, so they're almost like fleeting implications. Which I really like! I do ...

Hey! This is great. It's eloquent, put-together, and thoughtful. I like the structure as well. I think it clarifies the overall arc of your realization without making it choppy. Your ...

This isn't the easiest story to follow but I like that to some degree, as it forces readers to pay more attention and read slowly. Same with the lack of ...

Hello there! I am here, if you hadn't guessed, to review! And review I shall! Very late, but who really cares? First I want to point out some phrases that ...

Hello! I like the switch in perspective here because we get to learn more about Chloe, Tyler, and their relationship. I also liked how the reader is left wondering who ...

Hm, I'm not actually sure how I feel about the ending. Part of me is like, "Yay, they got together, I'm happy as a clam!" but another found the corniness ...

I like the idea here and how it was written. I'm really looking forward to more! The characters were nice, I can't say more because it's the first chapter, but ...

*dramatic theme music* Hi! I'm here to review! On the subject of being appropriate for the website, I mean, it's rated 18+, so I'm not seeing a problem. I don't ...

Oh this will be fun. >:D I love the story idea. The style is nice and works well with the plot and premise. I like how you've set up the ...

xD Ha, you're the third I've met so far. Being an Asian girl, I find this amusing beyond belief. And you wrote this two years ago? Wow. I don't really ...

Hi. I like the formatting and simplicity of this poem, as well as the rhyming, In the first phrase if the first stanza, I think you meant "swept" and in ...

The first words that come to mind (after wow, of course) are startling and familiar. I love all the observations you have. I found them familiar without ever consciously thinking ...

I really enjoyed this. I like your take on time-travel. The alternate realities and what-not are always full of plot holes of mind-boggling proportions. I thought it ended at a ...