JediDeadpool

DAMN RIGHT IT'S CATERING TO THE READER! DAMN RIGHT IT'S A CONFLICT OF INTEREST DAMN RIGHT IT'S A FANTASTIC NAME DAMN RIGHT EDITORS ARE ANXIETY-INSTILLING DAMN RIGHT I SHOULD'VE... wait ...

Feel free to use any of this! I'm jut trying to help :) if you don't want to change it, don't feel you have to.

Of the two left, the third one is remedied most easily; "I never expected that after dying by getting hit by the train, I'd wake up in a couple short ...

I did like it the first time I read it, then unliked it immediately. I've technically liked it about 30 times since then. But now it's all official ^-^

Shush about the songs

I don't write songs. Personal reasons, but I always end up being really sad when I do. Also, the whole fitting it to music isn't easy for me

Oh, my mistake. I assumed you had borrowed off of 'A midsummer night's dream' or related fiction. There is a trickster god named Puck, who always plays tricks on everyone. ...

*reminds you to review this*

It's still here liek what even

Everyone does ;) I love your writing btw lmao

Hey, this story is about me! :D

This work has haunted me for a while now. It looks good enough to read, but due to the length, I mentally kept shying away from it for other, shorter ...

Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you found your way to my poem, read it, and decided to leave a review. However, 1. "an emotional catharsis" is redundant, as ...

Actually you're right. I want the protagonist to come off as snobbish, as in 'a person who wants to come off as a person who wants to come off as ...

Thank you for the review! I had hoped you liked it. I have fixed all the grammar fails. I have also added a snippet about the stuck-uppity snobbishness... Hopefully that ...