Jcsmooth

I appreciate it man! You're right it could be a letter probably better suited as one.

Yea I don't proofread well I just let my emotions go and then write it. I apreciate this and sadly...she just shrugged it off I think

I appreciate your kind words! Especially the hopefulness she'd fall for me, but alas she read it and liked it; but more or less shrugged it off. It's the life ...

Hey I appreciate this a lot, I wrote it for a girl obv. I was actually nervous about it, it was like i'd never wrote a poem before. I was ...

Thank you! these are the reviews I need I get wrapped up in my own ego and just throw things out there

I appreciate this, I was kinda nervous about posting something so short. I kind of like being unique in my poems in some say. I feel as is my structure ...

I am thank you ^_^ I'm just a sad guy who has a fragile heart.

Done and done ;)

Thankee! I knew you'd review well and correct things I missed. I overlooked the line thing completely. I hadn't even realized it was the only short one.

I appreciate it!

Thank you, it was kind of pressed things happened today I did not forsee....had a rush of emotions.

He doesn't have her, he wants to start anew with her

The only thing more, I would even fathom to make of this; would be a short introductory page for a book I may not even write. I appreciate your encouraging ...

This is nothing more than a note. It's not a chapter, story, or even a poem. It's categorized in other for a reason. "Let me state, this is a scrawled ...

Simply put You are amazing