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Jcsmooth

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: That Which Scars Me Every-time.

    Hey all be sure to like the poem in the top right corner if you please! ^_^

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: That Which Scars Me Every-time.

    Then my goal is complete, if I reach atleast 1 person per poem I am happy.

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: That Which Scars Me Every-time.

    Hey I appreciate you taking the time to drop me kind words.

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I am A Star with an Eternal Light

    Thanks man I appreciate you taking the time to tell me this

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I am A Star with an Eternal Light

    This is an old piece, I wish I could remember why I wrote this what the meaning was. Yes my writing generally is raw and I make mistakes. I'm glad ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Diary

    Hey JC here for review day. This is really an amazing piece! I'm a fan of this freestyle of poetry. It's more important for us as poets, to look past ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Diary of a Failure

    Either way, it's amazing and i'm ignorant :)

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: SlushySlapped

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: SlushySlapped

    It's a word that I used for not or are not. I guess its not a word but im making it one if thats the case.

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: SlushySlapped

    I appreciate the review ^_^ I know what I need to do leave the no comma or period mark. I'm glad you didn't go to nye like everyone else.

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: SlushySlapped

    Thanks! There is always things I could do better. My imagery seems to lack more than not in my poems. I am mainly a flash writer I write many of ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: SlushySlapped

    My view of weeping stars are stars falling. They see something so beautiful and want to be closer to it so they fall to the Earth. My convictions and writing ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Scar

    I appreciate this point of view alot. It's exactly what I need in a review. I wrote this at the beginning of my poetic journey 5 years ago. It's an ...

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Rantings of a Love-Struck Fool Vol.1

    I often times end things swiftly relying on the imagery of the words to keep a flow. I'm glad you understand what I was trying to say, also I was ...

    Oct 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Rachel Rose

    The idea is that it was too be a poem for a girl. So I had to alter lengths here and there to make it fit the the end of ...

    Oct 17, 2013


And you have to flaunt the weird, my friends.
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