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Re: Twilight
I liked the first three Twilight books. I thought that they were very entertaining. They don't have any universal messages to be gained from them, they're not particularly literary, but ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: The truth about teachers
This is for my English assignment. I have to write a short script of a scene about anything. This script was actually inspired by my English teacher herself. I've never ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Exile - Chapter 1 - Part 1
'Twas nightfall in the kingdom of Xarifaa where young elf Tristan was stealthily climbing into a grubby unlocked window to William's Gemstone. The biggest thing that could be improved in ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Lost and Discovered: Prologue part 1
I think that if you're going to write a story about Greek mythology, you should actually stick to the actual gods and goddesses for the most part. I can see ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Battlefield
Wow! I think it's awesome that you chose to do an acrostic poem! I definetly agree that more punctuation is needed, but I love the message of the poem. It ...
Mar 1, 2008
