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JayeCShore

JayeCShore

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Second Always Comes Last: Nazza [null]

    SECOND ALWAYS COMES LAST NAZZA ( 07 ) Hey, J.C. here for a review! Formatting: There are two types of formatting in writing; 1) Visual Formatting: The way you pair ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: The Time I Fought Death

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, so super short because I have to go. I thought this was funny, mostly because I loved your Avocado-Free Work Day poem. It ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: I Hope Your Appendix Explodes

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, so I already reviewed this as AE, so I'll just elaborate a little more on my old review. Because that's not cheating at ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Sinatra

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem was interesting. I didn't find it all that dramatic, simply because you're far better at writing satire and comedy than this sort ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Satire Re: Government.

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! 9/11 is an inside job. I'm not even going to comment on that, even though I just did. I could go on for days ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Horrible

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, it's going to be hard to get 100 points with this one, but I'll try :P Like Pample, I was envisioning some dark ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Saturday Night

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I approach my DVD player, Insert Star Wars: Episode IV. I watch Luke Skywalker complain, For two hours more. Aww, I love Star Wars. ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: What Penguins Really Think

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, not much to review here. Though it's short, and practically pointless, I did get a small kick out of it. So, in an ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: The Apocalypse Is Near

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Man, this is old :D Here is what happened On this day This is heartbreaking Causing much dismay You start out with good rhythm ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Second Always Comes Last: Beauregard [Null]

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Sir hadn’t shown up that day, but the five of us still proceeded to his classroom of schedule, assembled the desks in their usual ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Who is She?

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! She is trying to find her way through the tangled jungle of life. This may just be me, but I would feel that this ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Second Always Comes Last: Darany [Null]

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I had taken the early train to avoid Shane and Daniel. I don’t know why I did it. They had done nothing and neither ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Swanson [Null]

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! The four of them. Sir, Hutcheon, Chen and Swanson. Sir and Hutcheon welcomed me like a friend, arms open and eyes open. They had ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Chen [Null]

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Why have I never been spat in the face these very words? I would prefer it that way. That truth. This is part of ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Seven (III)

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! You said don't read it so...have to read it. He smirked as he thought back to the past few days, and the way his ...

    Jun 29, 2014


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