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Re: Second Always Comes Last: Nazza [null]
SECOND ALWAYS COMES LAST NAZZA ( 07 ) Hey, J.C. here for a review! Formatting: There are two types of formatting in writing; 1) Visual Formatting: The way you pair ...
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Re: The Time I Fought Death
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, so super short because I have to go. I thought this was funny, mostly because I loved your Avocado-Free Work Day poem. It ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: I Hope Your Appendix Explodes
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, so I already reviewed this as AE, so I'll just elaborate a little more on my old review. Because that's not cheating at ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Sinatra
Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem was interesting. I didn't find it all that dramatic, simply because you're far better at writing satire and comedy than this sort ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Government.
Hi, J.C. here for a review! 9/11 is an inside job. I'm not even going to comment on that, even though I just did. I could go on for days ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Horrible
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, it's going to be hard to get 100 points with this one, but I'll try :P Like Pample, I was envisioning some dark ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Saturday Night
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I approach my DVD player, Insert Star Wars: Episode IV. I watch Luke Skywalker complain, For two hours more. Aww, I love Star Wars. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: What Penguins Really Think
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, not much to review here. Though it's short, and practically pointless, I did get a small kick out of it. So, in an ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Apocalypse Is Near
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Man, this is old :D Here is what happened On this day This is heartbreaking Causing much dismay You start out with good rhythm ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Beauregard [Null]
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Sir hadn’t shown up that day, but the five of us still proceeded to his classroom of schedule, assembled the desks in their usual ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Who is She?
Hi, J.C. here for a review! She is trying to find her way through the tangled jungle of life. This may just be me, but I would feel that this ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Darany [Null]
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I had taken the early train to avoid Shane and Daniel. I don’t know why I did it. They had done nothing and neither ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Swanson [Null]
Hi, J.C. here for a review! The four of them. Sir, Hutcheon, Chen and Swanson. Sir and Hutcheon welcomed me like a friend, arms open and eyes open. They had ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Chen [Null]
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Why have I never been spat in the face these very words? I would prefer it that way. That truth. This is part of ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Seven (III)
Hi, J.C. here for a review! You said don't read it so...have to read it. He smirked as he thought back to the past few days, and the way his ...
Jun 29, 2014