Jasperbiscuitt

Love it! I love how you clarify that it is a dream but it feels more like a nightmare. I enjoyed the format, as well. It defies regularity, just as ...

I love this so much!! It is really unique and I love the educational but lingering feeling that this invokes. My only suggestion would be to maybe space the segments ...

LOVE the repetition. This is truly mesmerizing to read because I become so entangled in the words that hit me a second time. I love the emphasis and the way ...

Hmmm. I am going to assume you to be a bus rider, and one with these experiences as well. I am also going to assume you to be much more ...

The setup of this poem is very raw and I'm assuming you didn't do a lot of editing when it comes to looking for a voluminous vocabulary. I love it! ...

This poem was so relateable and so beautiful! I really enjoyed learning about similar experiences from someone else's viewpoint. I find it hard sometimes in life to take what people ...

This is so beautiful! I really enjoyed the topic and found it easy to relate to life and the things I've seen. It's amazing to see how many people have ...

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This poem is very well-written! It made me feel caged and trapped, not just physically, but within my own mind. A few parts felt a bit repetetive—like the word "time", ...