Jashael

*tearing up* *clap clap*

Hi, Eccedentesiast! Those parts I put in bold are the ones I thought were prolly confusing but I have no idea how to fix. But seeing that only one person/beta ...

Hi, Storm! I did mention that I highlighted the parts I needed help with so your saying that this line and that line "doesn't make sense" don't help at all. ...

Just click the link in the note! :D Haha.

Hey, Love! (Oh, wow haha.) Jash here for a very quick review. I love this! There you go. Keep meowing -- err -- writing, Jash x

THIS REVIEW HAHA

Hey! So glad to hear your desire to write has been elevated! You should continue writing! Okay, for your questions, I will have to link you to articles which might ...

OMGIE THIS IS AWESOME HAHA

Hmm... I wonder what you mean by "structured." :O

LOL at the "BABY I'M WORTH IT."

Hi, Kara! Thank you for your thoughts! :)

You're very much welcome! I'm happy to hear I've helped!

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HOW ARE YOU ONLY 13. MUCH WOW, TOO TALENT.

Hmm... I meant a voice as in when your piece has a "voice." But that can work, too, if it works for you! Haha.