Jashael

Hey, Dreg! Jashy here for a quick review. I like the start, but this stanza confused me: And as you turn away words come but won't say and why can't ...

This has been featured for a while I think a couple of months ago. Never really got the chance to take a look at what it was about. But here ...

Dear Jojo, I'm finally here. I go to the technical sides first. Should I? Yes, I should. But even striving's got to have its limit

Hello, Skins. I have bad news for you. Do you see me now? - reviewing a short work of yours because I'm kind of shy now that I'm not online ...

This is so funny. I'll echo though a thought I've read above me: I agree that you could have expanded the dialogue. HIhi... I would have loved a bit more ...

Hey Twin, I was waiting for the link. Guess you were too lazy to give someone whom you're requesting a review from the link, huh? LOL But anyway, I went ...

...about the odd word repetitions, I want them there! They add to the supposed 'darkness' of the song. Haha... OK, OK... I get it. Though I don't think it's necessary ...

My dear Jojo... I'm here at last. Gotten over the reviewer's block and back with reviewing. First are some nitpicks: " Move! Get outta here!" Here, I don't really think ...

Hey, Tm, I have a couple of nitpicks for ya: M r. its' >> No apostrophe there. This isn't a review. Just wanted to point out those petty mistakes for ...

Hey, Jas h , thanks so much for the request. I'm glad this one is a short story... :D Well, I think am better with prose than poetry, that is, ...

LOL the blabber was good. I like reading blabbers. Anyway, because there was a blabber, I guess I'll be doing a review of this tomorrow... but not today. I just ...

Hey, Jas. Thanks for the request. Though I must warn you right now, I'm not so good reviewing poetry that I don't get. I'm more of an emotional, internal poet? ...

I really liked this. Though the continuity was a bit odd. This should be in a narrative poem. LOL Just sayin'. Anyway, this isn't really much of a review. I ...

My dearest Sol, you've been prolific this week, I think. :D Here I am, clicking on your featured poem again and giving you a review. Or maybe just my comments. ...

POST 1/3 First, I'll have to apologize for not doing this in the previous days. I had limited Internet connection, which I gave to e-mail check. I haven't been reviewing, ...