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Re: Taboo [7]
I'm waiting for my real mom to watch. =) So I guess I'll be giving you another review. =)) The format will be like the in the previous one. =)) ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [6]
Hi, Dad. I wanted to take a break from writing. I have a speech to finish today actually, but my mind is too drained. I just wanted to read something...then ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: The Photosynthesis Song (Telephone parody)
All I can say is that I LOVE THIS, and this will be a total help to students, May I ask permission to cover telephone with these lyrics? Of course, ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 2 - P. 2
Hey, Roal! Thanks for the review. I'm finally here, bored and doing reviews. Uh, I'll first cover nitpicks before I go on with an overall opinion. I'm not going to ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: A Delivery (Yuriiko's Postsecret's Contest)
I'll be worthless here tiger, I just wanted to comment. LOL you used Chinese...hmm...I believe that Filipinos are the Asians who are really eating rice ALL DAY... hahaha...yup... LOL nevermind ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: In The Storm
He would never put me through something I can't do? Hey, Sol! Just a wee nitpick for you. Other than that, this was very simple and nice. ;) keep writing ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Fire-bird chapters prologue and chapter 1
Heyowww! Here as requested. Wait. Seriously, Pointe? This is it? O_O It's so short! Anyway, nitpicks in pink font. Prolouge: He stood there , looking through the cracked glass of ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
I love this so much LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I keep on laughing while I was singing to your words. LOL yeah, there could have been better word choice, but so what?! :lol: ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Hey, Unc. Nephew here to review as requested. I was supposed to review this yesterday, but I forgot which folder I saved it in. *sigh* Anyway, how’s it going? I ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Fatal love
Hey, Point! Here now as requested. First, the reviewers above have pointed out the nitpicks such as missing punctuations and mispellings, so I won't bother repeating them. I'll just tell ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: My Hero
ROADY! (haha I just gave you that weird nickname. so sorry, I'm not good with nicknames. =)) ) I'm here again! And thanks for the request! I'm excited to review ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 1
Hey, Bickazer! =)) Jash here as requested. Sorry if I'm taking so long. My sched suddenly went all crammy crammed crammed. :p Ah...and I also apologize if all that I ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Bring Me To My Home *tweaked*
Gah, I love it, ISH! 8) Oh, just one line Show me to the home just think you should reconsider this line. Pff..whatever. Nothing much to say here except it's ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: When God Comes In
hey, Jojo! XD =)) Saw this at the GHMF page. =)) Sooo...here I am. Okay, I'm now on with the review. I just find this a bit cliche: "Just swallow ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Wings And Fins (Chapter 1)
Hey, Spike. Here as requested. But before I begin, I must say, you're good. Grammar is fairly good. Just had some mistakes with capitalizing like in these lines: Book o ...
Nov 6, 2010
