Jashael

Hi, umamima! I'm Jash, and I'm (also) a songwriter. The only nitpick I have for you is: "...the only think I want to see..." I think you meant "thing". I ...

One nitpick: Adam ' s This reminds me of C.S. Lewis' Scretape Letters. You know that? It's a demon's letters for his demon uncle. He's being trained. LOL And I ...

Sol, I'm here because you begged me. But I would have clicked it anyway even if you never told me. Yes, I'm busy, and my head isn't ready for reviewing ...

You! Fireheartedanimekaratepup! You... I haven't heard from you. You bailed on me. Kidding. Here I am, not using the spot I've saved, which is weird. And I'm not the "a" ...

Hello, ZLYF! I'm uploading something right now so I found the time to sneak out to YWS and finally give you the review you've been waiting for... Err... requested. (LOL) ...

I feel really out of place commenting on this, since I can neither speak nor understand Kastila , and everyone keeps saying it's better in Spanish, and I seem to ...

Hey, Justlittleoleme! Thanks for the review request. Sorry that I couldn't get to this earlier. I'm just too busy these days. D: Since you said that this is just a ...

Hey, Justlittleoleme! I'm a poet. But my poetry isn't traditional poetry. I write songs. So yeah... I don't think I'm very good with traditional poetry, esp. in reviewing 'em. But ...

My heart pounded when I read this. The skeleton of the work was too familiar. Why it sounded so familiar? If you outlined this particular chapter, it would be strangely ...

Hi, there, ChocolateMoonlight! (Such a pretty username you got there, huh.) I'm Jashy and I'm here to give your piece its first review. But just a quick one, okay? =) ...

I can totally relate to this poem. Funny thing. When I was fifth grade, I changed my nickname from Aboo to Jash. XD Well, I didn't really wanna change my ...

Dear Icy, I am here to know more about you character before I even attempt of entering your contest of which you were forcing encouraging me to enter. I am ...

KATIIIIIE! I wanted to review something of yours. So yeah. Can I split this review into two posts? - since I don't think I can finish it before my dad ...

Hello Senzafine! You know me, and I'm here to give out a quick review. I really like this line: While trying to find something in you That can give me ...

OK, so I was just reading it, and you were like, "Never mind." :lol: Here I am, from facebook. Haha... What I didn't like is the repetition of "Love you..." ...