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Re: A Sunrise for God *Edit*
Hi Hero! =) You know me already. And I was roaming around and found a poem of yours. Figured out if I could give a decent review. =) Anyway, here ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Totally In Love
Hey Iamjemo, I am Jash (lol) and I'll be giving you a review today--err--tonight. =)) But before that, I welcome you to YWS! =) Hope you're getting the hang around. ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1.
Hey there coolperson! I'm Jash, and as promised, I went to check out your chapter. I won't have time though to check out the reviewers above. Here it goes: NITPICKS ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: So This Is Goodbye
Hey MusicAndWritingSpeak! I'm Jash and I'll be reviewing your poem today. =) NITPICKS | PAY ATTENTION Maybe I was the girl to shy to o be loved I held my ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Dear Dreamer
Hey dreamer! I mean--rememberme (lol) I'm Jash and I'm here to review your poem today. First are NITPICKS ...( pay attention to the words in this color) I can ' ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Letters to the Dead
Hey Rain, just checking out and roaming around the poetry section and I'll have to nitpick this: "you're", Rain..."you're" Anyway, why do you have to always nostalgic?! O_o You told ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: I Love You More
Hey, foreveralone, I'm jashy and I'll be reviewing your poem for today. I can see that you already got some reviews above, but I won't read those. Instead, I'll tell ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (Chapter 1)
Hey, Miss Classy. So I'm here as promised. I'm just clearing up a few things before I go on telling you about what I think of the story itself. PAY ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Hey, Skins. I know you didn't request anything, but I just thought I'd give you a review. =)) NITPICKS | PAY ATTENTION | CHANGED Community service... They were kidding, right? ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
So, I've decided to do a random review. =)) Hi, Miss CC. Can I call you CC? I wanna call you CC... LOL Okay here it goes... NITPICKS | CHANGED ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: *deleted*
Monday, November 29, 2010 1717 GMT +8 ************************* Hey, Roal! Here as requested.I'm first to post. Oh, I'm excited. The chap's title is The Rebel . LOL Okay, just so ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
I can swear that yesterday, this was in first person! O_o Aww.. whatever Unc. Nei--ehem--Nephew here to review. *fixes collar* NITPICKS | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION So I won't be ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: happy never after
Hey, Retro... Jashy here doing a random review. =) My only nitpick is this: Do es a princess es wait in high towers? I just feel like there should be ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Vagrant mother
Just one nitpick actually. Now I 'm roaming the street... That's all really. Your poem was well-written. There was rhythm in it and I enjoyed it. Plus, an evaluation, the ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: The Cute War of the Ages. (Penguins vs. Meerkats) PART 1.
Hey, my dearest niece, Uncle here to review. =)) I guess this is the very first review you'll be receiving from me, eh? NITPICKS | PAY ATTENTION | CHANGED His ...
Nov 26, 2010
