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36! OH MY GOSHNESS! I feel like a stalker, this is like the third time I've commented on this, lol.

Woah! You've gotten 28 likes! That's crazy! Well, you deserve it!! Lol

Ha that was funny.

I save a spot for my review! :)

Lol. You don't have too. I hate Twilight now :)

I loved this :) NOW IT SHALL HAVE 10 LIKES!! BY THE POWER OF SIR ARTHUUUUUUUUUR!!!!!

Thanks :)

You could say something like, The murky water cast a dim reflection of the war scene above. She turned away from the Captain, her baby blue eyes the only brightness ...

XD Snoink, after re-reading this I wonder....was this just a joke or are you actually continuing this?

Wow, I was a really irritating 8th grader.

Oh My Gpd. Today during study hall we had to read our English book, which is October Sky AKA Rocket Boys (amazing book might I add), I had already finished ...

yeah I think you should veeto that line.

hey bond, its supposed to seem like heaven but its not. that's all I'll say for now

hey, thanks for the review! I guess your right, this doesn't do much other than state the obvious but I guess that was my point. :) Thanks for reviewing!

I must admit it is genius! :)