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Hey, This is more like a poem? or lyrics maybe? You should probably ask a mod to move it to the correct forum. I'm not quite sure what 'Ili' means ...

Hola, There really isn't much for me to say here unless you want twelve paragraphs of fangirl gushing. Maybe because it's 11am and that's the earliest I've been awake in ...

*spot holder for a review later on in my life when it's not 4:39 in the morning* Hey, I liked this a lot. The plot, the way you write, the ...

Hey, I owe you a review for the last chapter and I'll get to that soon enough but I think we basically brushed over all the important parts of that ...

Hey, FIRST TO REVIEW! YESSS! Anyway, this was a little bit different from the last chapter, but just as good. It did leave more questions than answers. To be honest, ...

Hey, I'm not sure whether you wanted a review on this, considering you heavily insulted it, but it's not that bad! I like the secret stanza idea, it's unique and ...

Hey, So I'm going to review your short story :). I've read a bunch of your pieces but never had the time or energy to review. You're a really great ...

Hola, I really liked this. It's really negative and depressing and not exactly the shining moment of the MC's life. I loved how you began with the MC's plan for ...

Hey, So I'm not sure whether this was a joke or if it was serious, but none the less, it was hilarious. You started it off pretty strongly and while ...

Hey, Fantastic. I fell so in love with this piece that you mustmustmusssst write more. Amazing imagery, amazing characters and I loved what you did with Annalise, turning it into ...

Grammar and little comments will be in red. This easily has the potential to be one of my all-time favorite short stories I've ever written. I haven't decided if I'm ...

Hey, I read this a couple of hours ago but only came to review now. I've read a couple of chapters of your novel 'Pornographic Kiss' and I liked it ...

Hi Lily! So I liked this very much. I agree with Explosive_Pen about how the first line of the first two stanzas sound too, I dunno, out there, like pushy. ...

Hello, This reads to me like something that should be inspiring and profound and deep, but isn't. First, the format is irritating. It’s a cage Or window That’s been shut ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS! It's a great site and while my review will be rather useless and unhelpful, in due time, you'll see that the majority writes incredibly thoughtful and ...