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Oh wow. That was unexpected! The scene honstly reminded me of that New Moon garbage scene when Edward and Bella break up but the end was really good. I personally ...

Hey, I liked this becasue of the descriptions and such but grammar and spelling mistakes were slightly annoying. I don't really understand what happened with the boy, you said a ...

EhMAgawd! I luv this! I luv this! plz plz plz plz rite more soon!!! ZOMG! This is da bomb man! I luv this! Can I marry your story?!?!?! Haha Just ...

Heya, Wow. This is oustanding! I keep seeing all the chapters and thinking, Oh I should read that, but the sci-fi thing scared me away. I normally don't like science ...

Hey this is good but confusing. It's the first day but he knows the girl Diana? I think what steered away Jaguar and me because I too got bored and ...

I think this was short but it worked for you. I think the end should have been a bit more epic though. It was a bit of a dissapointment. The ...

This was funny but a bit short. My favorite part *cough* suck it mcdonalds *cough* ooooooh burn :) And wendy's is da bomb man but Bk is not as fattenign ...

Hey, Funny I had just written a kidnapping diary thing a couple weeks ago. Mine was kinda based off the Amy SMart kidnapping because she had a diary that she ...

Hey, Wow this was really good. I think that you should have explained the fire thing, the reason a bit more. The closest families of each of passengers are being ...

I love this idea and I love the story so far. Only thing your spelling needs alot of work. I've been told many times and now I'll tell you, when ...

This is genius!! I so love this story and this idea. Would you mind if I did one for some of my classes but I'll put like 'This was thehobbitgangstas ...

OH. My. Freaking. God. THIS WAS AH-MAZING!!!! Funny, I'm writing a hororr twin story too, mine is about the cliche one twin sister better than the other except with a ...

Hey this was good but I think that you tried a bit too hard to act like MAx, you weren't as tough as she sounds and not as sarcastic. Plus ...

This was a fairly good poem my only problem was unlike your last poem. This had too much puncuation. IT distracts the reader from the writing and can be annoying. ...

I dont have a favorite I have a list of books I