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Ghosts weigh down my sleep. Some people call them memories recalled in the depth of un-day, undulating my body in its watery bed, the dark form in the corner of ...

I liked this but I don't think I really understand it. I read it a few times and I think the first stanza is what confuses me. What you are ...

Hey Shubhi, You always give me the best reviews and I humbly hope this one can help you. :] Overall, this is a really good story. The perspective of a ...

Haii, Here as requested. [: So, this starts out fairly well. It's all in a block, with very limited spacing, which is kind of annoying, but I can deal with ...

Hey, Sorry it's taken so long. This is nicely paced and the dialogue was believable which is great. It was a pretty good chapter, so good job. Liam honestly really ...

I started this slightly cautious but like basically every other short story I've read by you, I realized that this is really beautiful. I don't have time to write a ...

I was going to do a full review on this but I'm not even sure whether you're going to see it so I'll just tell you the one big problem ...

Hi! So, I'm absolutely terrible at reviewing poetry, but I'm going to try my hardest to give you some constructive criticism. :] You could still see Where she pressed down ...

Hey, You've reviewed some of my work and I thought I'd return the favor. :] You said to tear it to bits so I'm going to be pretty harsh, just ...

This is the THIRD time I'm writing this review. THIRD. THIRD. THIRD. My computer and the internet and most of the universe hates me. I swear, I'm saving this every ...

Hi! Thanks for the review on 'Winter's Love'. I'll be back to finish this review on Friday but for now I'm just going to go through a few nit-picks. This ...

I don't understand. What do you expect us to do with this other than review it and 'nitpick the hell out of it'. This is where people post literary works ...

1) The community here isn't very supportive. For all the "thou shalt critique!" stuff I hear, I've received maybe two comments that have actually made me think about my writing. ...

This is rather gooey and mushy, but it's the type that's just right around Christmas. Everyone needs a little fluff in their lives. It's really well-done and I don't have ...

Hey Lauren, I know I promised a review like two weeks ago and I'm sorry it took so long but here I am! Stand in front of that mirror and ...