Jared

Thank you very much. This is my first fiction-related work in a long time, so I'm trying to ease into it slowly. Hopefully as I introduce new characters and complete ...

Thank you for the review. Yes, I've noted the ellipses. I agree with what you had to say about them mostly, but out of personal preference, on the other hand, ...

That can probably be attributed to what I read. I'll keep insisting this to everyone I meet - the best way to become a better writer (other than writing a ...

This is what I love about having other people look at and nitpick my own work. They notice random stuff that I don't notice when I edit it. For instance, ...

The thing about this is that, it's not about what you truly understand about it. I'm going for first emotional and intellectual impressions, whether you thought it was too vague ...

I have officially changed how Akven speaks to reflect on his intelligence.

Here's my excuse for not going into detail on the ship. The fact is, I don't know anything about ships. I couldn't tell you the exact details, and I feel ...

Yes, the symbolism was intended. I'm glad you caught it. Admittedly, it's not very obscure, but still.

I agree with everything you have said. Incidentally, I added that last 'frowning' right before I posted this. Sometimes I have issues with limiting myself to realistic grammatical usage for ...

Thank you very much. If you have time, you should check out my newest work, A Torn Kingdom. It's part of a school project I'm working on.

Thanks for your suggestions. I've never been into poetry that much, and usually focus on writing novels, short stories, and similar pieces. As this is my first attempt, I found ...

Thank you so very much. Your review was very helpful, and I will make the changes you suggest soon.

Thank you for your review. I will take all of your suggestions into consideration.

No problem. I accidentally posted a second review when I was trying to edit my original review (I don't even know how I did). Hopefully someone who can fix it ...

Thank you for your review. I do not exactly intend on this becoming anything. I do reference this forest in my newest novel, however. I believe if you are looking ...