Jared

Yeah, when I first wrote this, I didn't even have a name for it. I tried to find a word to replace model but I couldn't. Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your review! If you liked it, try reading some of my other horror works. Particularly my horror works.

Thanks for your review!

Ah I see. I'm not quite sure where I hope to go with this piece. I was thinking of perhaps making it into a novel, but I'll need to do ...

I have never seen that episode, but I realized this short story would likely draw some comparisons to other things such as shows and maybe even novels, even though the ...

Thank you for your review! I've been waiting for a review on this for awhile.

First of all, thanks for your review. I am now aware that I asserted a certain amount of ambiguity as far as the gender of the protagonist in this piece, ...

Sorry, the second chapter isn't out yet! (If it were, I would have it in a folder with this chapter.) I am suffering writer's block right now, and this chapter ...

Also the sense of mystery is part of the experience, but I can see it might be a little confusing in the beginning.

I would of thought it would be pretty clear where he was, but I will add some more obvious clues in. Thanks for your review.

Thanks for your review.

I'm guessing "the boy with the bloody dagger" may have been better.

As far as the money goes, they didn't tell him they were trapping him in his mind. They lied and said they were doing a different study (I tried to ...

I agree with what you had to say about the 'now' part. I will keep you updated, and I'll put all of these installments in a folder for easy access. ...

Thanks for your review. I've often pondered the idea of exploring the mind and dreams.