Jared

I decided to review this because I enjoy school very much, though agree there could be many improvements. Well, of course, these aren't the improvements I had in mind. But ...

This may be a little short, because I have to get off soon. Here I go. First, I'm assuming you're a Harry Potter fan. That's great. I only have one ...

Excellent poem, I must say. I don't have much to critique here (nothing major, anyways), so I'll just move on to my interpretation and what I like about it. First ...

Hello there. Here's another review from Jared. First, nitpicks. She looked around quickly. She had time, but not enough to waster by standing around. Typing error: "[waster] by standing around" ...

Jared here with another review. This is very nice, first of all. Nitpicks "My hero is my mother" should be inverted to "My mother is my hero". "wars" should be ...

Hello, this is a review from Jared. Nitpicks Jason and Edwards looked petrified upon being locked in a cell in the corner of a dark prison. They saw an old ...

Hello there. Jared here with a review. Nitpicks I didn't spot any particularly prominent grammar mistakes. Praise and greater analysis First of all, I'd like to say you have a ...

Alright, here I go with another review. Nitpicks It was unbelievable how much strength was needed to hold these door. Since you're referring to one door, it should be 'the ...

Hello there. This is Jared with a review. Nitpicks Offending items will be enclosed in brackets (unless the whole entire quoted part is the offender), as will additions. The way ...

Hello there, this is Jared with a review. First, some nitpicking. A trickle of red. But it can also be floods, Of crimson instead. Crimson and red are two different ...

Jared here with a review. I won't bother with nitpicks, because I see you have already amended most of the grammar errors, if not all of them. Praise and deeper ...

Jared here, with a review. First, nitpicking. Parts in brackets are the offenders (additions are also in brackets). The wedding may have been called off but they still had the ...

This was hilarious. I can hardly give this much criticism, except that it is a tad bit odd before you get to the end. I'm pretty sure (or I hope) ...

To be frank, this poem is undeveloped. Essentially, a good portion of it is the word 'tick' and 'ticking'. It is my understanding from a comment below of yours that: ...

Hello there. This is Jared, with another review. First, I'll start with nitpicks. Offending words or parts will be enclosed in brackets. Additions to your original text will also be ...