Jamie_rocks

Mark tried to scream, but as soon as he opened his mouth the icy cold water flooded in, and all that emerged was a strangled gurgling sound. He kicked and ...

There's some mild language, it will probably get way worse later on. I Dare You “Aaarrrggghhhh! Get out of my room!” Donya Allen screamed at her younger brother, Gregory. She ...

A sharp cry of pain could barely be heard over the loud crack of gunshot. Like a scene from a movie, a young teenage boy clutched his bloodied chest and ...

OK, this is just an idea that popped into my head one night, so even I don't think it's all that great. I wanted to see if people think I ...

For a moment Brad opened his eyes. An unfamiliar face was looking down at him, wearing glasses and with dirty, tangled brown hair. Brad didn’t think she knew he was ...

A cry of pain rose out above the crack of a gunshot. Like a scene from a movie, a teenage boy clutched his bloodied chest and fell over backwards. As ...

Brad groaned and blinked open his eyes. Every part of his body ached, and the bright fluorescent lights glared down harshly. His head was fuzzy, and he couldn't figure out ...

Okay, so this is an excerpt from a novel I'm working on, the majority of it is a flashback. It's been pulled out from around the middle, but I don't ...

Yea, last quarter we always had free time at the end of the day, and this is what I came up with to pass the time. The people are all ...

Okay, so this is the heavily edited version of the first chapter of my novel-in-progress THe Love Note. I'll warn you it's very long, but apprently we are no longer ...

Okay, I've done yet another rewrite of the preface and first chapter of the Love Note, due in large to people saying I jumped into the action too fast. So, ...

Okay, so here's the second chapter, also heavily edited. Tell me what you think. I know it's really short, but I did my best. _____________ The missing note bothered Brad ...

Okay, so this is the edited version of preface I submitted about a year ago and haven't touched since then. I wrote it today while I was waiting to be ...

PG-13 for references to rape. I know it's short, given that it's only the preface. Please just tell me what you think of this, I'm sure it has typos, and ...

Brad groaned and opened his eyes. Almost immediately he was alarmed; all he could see was a glaring bright white light. He wasn’t aware that his breathing sped up, but ...