Jalmoc

I loved this! Oh! I'm Jalmoc by the way or Wesley whichever. :p I absolutely loved how this caught my attention. Whats better than finding out that the one you ...

Hey, I'm Jalmoc. :) I was scrolling through the stories and the title caught my eye. Honestly, you had me hooked from the beginning. I love the idea of the ...

[Requires a lot of editing, but this is the “raw version”, enjoy! :D ] P.s this is semi-random.. I cried. I was all alone again. I didn’t see anything from ...

I really loved this piece! :D It wasn't boring, it kept my attention the whole time! (Which is kinda hard to do. Lol) I loved the feel that I felt ...

This feels a little rushed, and not quite a story... However, it has potential to become one. Expand more on these friends and the guy she likes... All her feelings ...

Hi there! I'm Jalmoc, and its a pleasure to meet you. :D I was randomly running through the romantic stories, and this one caught my eye. I'm just going to ...

Hey! Jalmoc here! I loved your story! It's about time someone wrote a MMA story! I'm a MMA fighter myself, so I understand a little that went on in this ...

Hey, I was looking through the romance stories and this one caught my attention. I'm not so good at reviewing, but stay with me alright? Lol. I chewed on my ...

Hi there! :) I thought that this was an excellent story! You over all let the emotions of the main character flow, so the readers could understand what she was ...

The ending is really hard to follow, what caused this nightmare? Was she actually pregnant? You might want to try and adjust the ending of this so that people can ...

Hey there! I thought that you did spectacular with this piece. I loved how you changed the definition of Angel! Who would've thought that they could be somehting else completely? ...

Hello! I was going through stories, and this title caught my eye, so I thought I would review it. Well first off, I loved the introduction, but i wish you ...

This was very well thought through for a quick inspiration story. :) I love how you gave the eraser feelings and desires, it makes the readers feel attached to the ...

HAHAHA. I loved it! I love the original song, but you just made it hysterical! I wonder what inspired you to redo the song in a pirate theme? I bet ...

Wow! This was a really great story. I'm not really any good at reviews, but it looks like everyone else got everythything that was wrong here. I just hope that ...