Jadix

So, this is my first post. Comments are great and they help a lot. This is only part 1/3 of the prologue to the story. Its a story that has ...

Thanks so far for the comments on my last peice. If you haven't read my first part of three on the prologue, please feel free to check it out topic19445.html

I placed this in the fantasy section as well because im honestly debating where to put it. This is only part 1/3 of the prologue to the story. Its a ...

after a few comments decided to edit and refocus. More comments please. Introduction It was a miserable evening. Rain fought its way through a cracked sky lined with hazy, dark ...

Please comment some more. Thanks! Introduction It was a miserable evening. Rain fought its way through a cracked sky lined with hazy, dark clouds that blocked out all forms of ...

This is my first poem. I wrote it in 3-5-3 style. tell me if you like it . Orange blossoms bloom Bloom without me, without life Sun

Its my second poem. Tell me what you think, please. Rain poured down on that day Arm in arm, mother and son All the things she wanted to say To ...

Chapter One. Edited 27 November 2007 Rain beat against the glass, streamed down, and formed veins down the window. It had rained for what seemed like hours. Lights within the ...

Hey Comments are appreciated. Chapter two Room number 212. Single room. Single bed. Single bathroom. Single. Period. Single cold shower. 6:43 A.M. Single coffee cup. Single sugar. Single cigarette. Si

Chapter One. Rain beat against the glass, streamed down, and formed veins down the window. It had rained for what seemed like hours. Lights within the small room flickered on. ...