Jadefox

It would be fun to do a video contest/extravaganza in a forum and users submit music videos of themselves singing the song. Winner gets featured on the front page, perhaps?

Hi there! Thank you for taking the time to review. I seriously appreciate the constructive criticism. I think, after writing this poem, I discovered I shouldn't post things late at ...

I don't think that would be capitalism ahaha. @jayflames1

Glad to hear it! I'm looking forward to seeing the final product! Good luck :)

@Morrigan, I definitely do agree with your advice. I did write this with a combined frustration for my own poetry skills and a number of "surface" reviews I had received. ...

Hey speakerskat, thanks for the review! I agree with you about the middle stanza. You're right when you say this poem was written out of frustration/anger with readers. Personally, I'm ...

Thanks!

Thanks for the positive feedback! And yes, this was inspired from exasperation from readers taking things as they are presented and not reading far enough into what's actually being said. ...

Thanks for the feedback! As a musician, I was commenting on the strange connection musicians including myself have with our instruments. Sometimes we absolutely feel it when and we love ...

My apologies for the glitch! It's been happening to me all night! Did not mean to send you two copies...

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Hey there! I thought I might review some past works because I stalk the pages of the past... I'll start with positive, because that's mainly all I have for you. ...

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Hey there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Jadefox, but just call me Jade; everyone does. First off, I would like to applaud you on your fabulous description throughout the ...

I'm glad I could help! Maybe the insomnia was for the better last night...hopefully you get more rest now! @Strange

Thank you for your feedback. I would like to mention as the story progresses, I mention "bombs raining down outside," and other phrases of that sort just in case you ...

Thanks, I'm glad to hear somebody appreciates my work. Let me know if you want me to take a look at anything for you :)