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Re: The Collapse of Society, Part 1
Hey, Jesse! This is a great introduction you've got going. Its a good hook - and I like the way you've described the aristocrats, with the reeking perfume etc. Though ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: Don't Trust the Light
Hi, BellaLandriev! Cool story, I like the way you've written this. It's ominous, and chilling. You've left the details vague, which definitely succeeds in adding to the creepy factor. You ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: ennui - 02
Hey Hanuli. I like the story, it's great fun to read! The humour adds a nice balance to it. I think adding some more description of the scenes might be ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: Grandmother
Hey tgham99! As a horror fan, I've gotta say this is awesome. Love the way you've written this. It's short, sweet, and creepy - great ending, too. You might want ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 4 - A Tale on the Front Lines
Hi, Shallowhouse! This is really fun to read! Just went through the first few chapters, I like the concept. Good story you've got going here. I think it has a ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: When Leaves Fall As People Do
Hi ryleigha! Love the story. Your descriptions are very captivating - you've done a great job balancing it with plot development. Sometimes people go overboard on description (I'm definitely guilty ...
Apr 27, 2020