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JackTheNarrator

JackTheNarrator

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Ignite Me

    sometimes you will choose to put your hand in the fire My favorite line. It sets the stage for the poem very early on and already creates a lot of ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: my gibberish take on hypocrisy.

    hypocrisy is when you criticize Facebook, by writing a 1000 word essay, “How Facebook wasted my time.” ^My favorite line. The line is very straightforward and very funny. It adds ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Why won't it end?

    Inky folds of fabric draped elegantly around her shoulders, whilst she rest her heavy head on the window. ^This was my favorite line. It sets the stage for everything and ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Dvsdvs

    Don't worry, don't be sad Death really isn't all that bad - My favorite lines^ - I read the description of this poem and it immediately peaked my interest. I ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Swans

    Right off the bat, I thoroughly enjoyed the first line of the poem. It sums up the subject matter the reader expects, but also opens many possibilities for the rest ...

    Oct 9, 2015


no i prefer gay chaos
— hop