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JackTheNarrator

JackTheNarrator

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Ignite Me

    sometimes you will choose to put your hand in the fire My favorite line. It sets the stage for the poem very early on and already creates a lot of ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: my gibberish take on hypocrisy.

    hypocrisy is when you criticize Facebook, by writing a 1000 word essay, “How Facebook wasted my time.” ^My favorite line. The line is very straightforward and very funny. It adds ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Why won't it end?

    Inky folds of fabric draped elegantly around her shoulders, whilst she rest her heavy head on the window. ^This was my favorite line. It sets the stage for everything and ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Dvsdvs

    Don't worry, don't be sad Death really isn't all that bad - My favorite lines^ - I read the description of this poem and it immediately peaked my interest. I ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Swans

    Right off the bat, I thoroughly enjoyed the first line of the poem. It sums up the subject matter the reader expects, but also opens many possibilities for the rest ...

    Oct 9, 2015


The fellow who thinks he knows it all is especially annoying to those of us who do.
— Harold Coffin