JabberHut

Oh, how rude of me. Whoops. XD I'm in CST! Smack in the middle of the U.S.

Absolutely! Give me a time and a place, and I'll try to make it work. :D (I'm free this evening, otherwise afternoons AND evenings are golden Fri/Sat.) Or I can ...

Bahahaha, I've had my experience with them! But as long as your character has likes, dislikes, habits, behaviors, strengths, and weaknesses, stereotypes no longer matter. :D

Horisun, that was so beautiful I WANT TO DRAW FANART BUT I CANNOT DRAW ???

I WAS WORRIED ABOUT THAT. I guess basically, it made more sense for her to say, "Who's she? And where can't she stay?!" or simply "where is there?!" because she's ...

Ooooh, okay! That makes more sense about Shiraku, I hadn't thought about her wings. I was only thinking muscle and sight. YES. I hope it turns out well next chapter ...

I think it still might be Julia right now because I just love her narration to death, but I get such a kick out of Izzy when she's being young ...

So I'm not gonna lie, my brain read it as Virtual. SO THAT WAS UNINTENDED. But you're welcome! XD

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGGOMGOMG I KNOW WHO HILL IS omggggggggggggggggggggggg what is going oooooooooooooon *PULLS HAIR*

LOL the drunk lady was real?! That's HILARIOUS. omg. I love that you incorporated it into this. OOOOOOOOOOOOH I'M EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER THEN! GUH.

Ohhh that would make sense. I'm not sure why that didn't occur to me. They're the only soldiers left, derp! Yeah, adding that bit might actually help a lot. Gosh, ...

Ooooh of course! It slipped my mind that he had to perform a dance for it, so that wouldn't work for Scorpus. Derp! I'm glad they're helping you out. :D ...

...the italics is hard to read with the punctuation nonsense. I put it in my original comment for easier reading. :D

I edited in the quote! If you control-find (CTRL F) for "closet," you'll see it. :D And yeah! I was sleepy when I wrote that, so I understand how I ...

HEY! I read the section (I have to head to bed here), so I thought I'd mention: 1) "When I realized I was eaves-dropping, I looked away and continued walking ...