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See, that kinda made sense for Mishal to just be like HNNNG ROWAN IS BEING ROWAN but I see it's more like Mishal is being respectful of Rowan's feelings. That's ...

Oh shoot, I forgot that. That's just my bad for forgetting because you've made that clear in previous segments. Derp! Also, I LOVE Fun Character Stuff! Totally all for it! ...

Ohhhh, that does make sense. A much more political reason that seems to fit much better in regards to rescuing his father. It was pretty vague here, but I also ...

YOU ARE MOST WELCOME. I should be thanking you for such an enjoyable read!!

Okay, that makes more sense about the Prince! He certainly seemed passionate about that issue, so I see what you were trying to do there now. Omg, the ballad will ...

Okay, perfect! Yeah, getting that sense of Normalcy in the character's (or characters') life is really good to have, so as long as we veer back in that direction at ...

DUDE. It's awesome to get such a good start on the translating! It can obviously be perfected later, so any amount of study for your first draft allows for really ...

Oh, awesome! I'll definitely check that out, see what you have planned for all these lovely characters of yours. I MUST KNOW! It's hard for me to answer that one, ...

That pun was SO UNINTENTIONAL and such a typo but I am OWNING IT ANYWAY BECAUSE IT WAS AWESOME. And I am glad! I'm having so much fun reading it, ...

I should specify that it really is on me, though, I'm not being like... obtuse. XD It's like I disregarded everything I learned and took what a coterie pleb said ...

I'm so sorry, I guess that went over my head. I didn't read that as sarcasm until I italicized the "daughter" in my head, so that's completely on me and ...

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It's all good! I'm glad they're even a little helpful. :D I'm having so much fun reading it!! CAN'T STOP, WON'T STOP.

Ahhhhh, yes! Okay, I figured there might be different chapter structure going on. That makes total sense, and I absolutely understand what you mean. :D Okay, cool! With that in ...

It definitely feels a little better and a little more natural now! Zoltar's one-on-one duel with the alpha was more pronounced as he was forced to prioritize that raptor alone, ...