JabberHut

Alright, Ash. I'm sorry I held this off, but my teachers swamped me with homework and I still ] didn't get it all finished. >_< Anyway, here goes nothin'...or somethin' ...

I completely forgot I posted this. :shock: Anyway, thanks for all your reviews. More are, of course, welcome. I'm still wondering when I thought this up...=/ Whatever. Thank you ^_^ ...

Thanks everyone for looking at this! Gladius: Lol, I'm glad Teddy came out the way I wanted. ^_^ I had trouble thinking of a name for a toddler. Teddy was ...

Thank you, everybody! Gladius: Thank you for catching those. I'll clear up those sentences now. 3B: The MC will be even more clearer in the third part. Otherwise, I'm glad ...

Thank you for your reviews, everyone! MidnightVampire: Thank you. ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't remember what event happened the next day that would explain this dream. It's ...

Oh, thanks for the reviews, guys! They're most appreciated! ^_^ flytodreams: Thanks for catching those typos. ^_^ Rieda: Thanks a lot (long time no see!) for catching that. I'll go ...

Hey, Gladius! I'm finally getting this crit in. ^^; ...cap had stayed in place; for some strange reason not ... Meh, use a period instead of a semi. :wink: “I ...

Hey, Gladius! Ooh, a Christmas chapter? Exciting! I'll try to do as much as I can tonight. ^_^ “She couldn’t have gone far, sir . ” The sergeant assured , ...

Hey! I'm really sorry I haven't gotten to this. :oops: I'm usually on top of my crits, but it's the Christmas season. ^^; I've been busy. But, here I am! ...

Hey, Gladius, m'friend! ^_^ Let's see what happens in your second chapter, shall we? *reads* Vanessa Satori was amusing her younger brother , Soran , when someone knocked on the ...

I forgot I had this story up. =/ I was just looking through my portfolio and...I found this. Thanks for the comments, DW, Twit, and Choco. They are appreciated. More ...

Ooh! Such a wonderfully long, embarrassing critique, kitty! Thanks so much! :D *hugs for Heather!* I made the changes and the revised version is currently up now. Jabber, the One ...

Hey, all! Thanks for the crits! More are welcome. ^_^ EERC--I know the ending's confusing. I was confused when I woke up. :P Thanks for reading it. ^_^ Reakeda--Thanks for ...

I am back at your request! Actually, I would've sent a PM, but there's a couple typos I'd like to point out. :P When the light touches the peak of ...

Thanks a lot to you too, Crystal. ^_^ Your reviews mean a lot to me too. *hugs* I'm glad you both enjoy my work (well, at least you're reading it ...