JabberHut

Hey, Connie! It's been a while. ^_^ Grammar and First Impressions I was the brother of Uriel in the pantheon in the world. But I haven’t been called by those ...

Back again! =D I must say, it's difficult nit-picking when avoiding grammar checks. xD *wasn't paying attention to grammar* Manfried was much better here than the previous section. So the ...

Suz! ^_^ I'm a bit rusty, so forgive me. I'll pull out only a couple nitpicks and then get into my thoughts on your wonderful piece here. ^_^ No flowers. ...

Hello, Always! Here's the critique I said I would do. Forgive me for any confusing points; I'm a little rusty. xD Grammar [ as requested ] In the past few ...

And here I am! ^_^ Alrighty, I was very confused, even when I reached the end. I mean, the conclusion answered some questions, but it brought back one big one: ...

Shina! I am here! No doubt about that, of course. However, I am on a time crunch. I'm not sure how much I'll say before I have to bust out ...

Hello, there! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ I was pleased to have read the original version of this. There are a few pointers I would still like to make note of ...

Hello again, JC! =D Dialogue Just like in the prologue, we have a few dialogue errors that are easy to fix. Snoink (A Moderator of YWS) wrote an article in ...

Hiya, Sumi! =D Okay, so I'm kind of excited 'cause my German class is finally coming in handy. xD I believe it's "Scheiße." You probably knew about the S-set, but ...

At least you know you are missing umlauts. xD Just be sure to put the one in "schon" there. Otherwise, you'll be saying, "Thanks already." xD Win, ja? Anyway, hi, ...

Hi, Ashley! ^_^ *sigh* I wish I could be of some service? This, again, is rather epic. As much as we say we hate it, we love drama. ^_^ This ...

Hiya, Ashley! =D Sick of me yet? This was also very much improved. Kudos! ^_^ Sophia mulling over all these thoughts helps the reader understand not only the situation but ...

Hey, Ashley! Back for more! ^_^ This chapter was so much better. It made me very happy. Carmen and Sophia were introduced much better, and we can see Carmen's liking ...

Hey, Ashley! Remember when I said I'd review this? xD Yeeeah, never got to it. But! I am here, and we'll see what I think. ^_^ First off, there was ...

Hello again, Mistress! ^_^ Where Am I? I compliment you highly on the description in the beginning. You did a very good job with that. Kudos! =D Then later, I ...