JabberHut

Hi, All! There's not much to the song really, but what you have provides an interesting story enough! But the one thing that probably stood out to me the most ...

Hey, AJ! Your song here actually has some really nice rhythm. It reads very well, which certainly means it'll be a nice listen once put to music! Very well done ...

Hey, Dasia! This is my first review on the new YWS, so feel honored! I'm rather excited, and hopefully, I won't give such a flimsy review or anything full of ...

MIKSTER! I'm baaaack! I got your request, but I had a busy day; so I'm a tad late, but I definitely looked forward to reading it. I finally did, and ...

Hi, SparkleDoubt! :D This is absolutely adorable, and I think your mom is going to love this entirely. Just... It's adorable. XD So adorable. I love it. and even as ...

Hi, Amy! :D You've got a very good story here. It's told very well, and it all flowed rather smoothly. Very nice job in holding to the plot! And keeping ...

Hi, Emily! Considering it's your first time writing a script, I think this went rather well. The characters really came through, and with scripts, it depends a lot on the ...

Hi, AJ! I'm back! :D This isn't one of your best works, but it's not one of your worst either. It's definitely getting somewhere, and with a little work, it ...

Hi, Robster! There's definitely a rhythm in the song, so I wouldn't worry much on that! The two songs you linked did help put this into perspective though, so danke! ...

Hi, Mike! This was really awesome with such a very strong message, and you refer to a lot of historical aspects to bring this alive even more. That's really, really ...

Hi, Searria! I agree with everyone that this was very well done. It pulled me in, oddly enough. The voice was very good! There was a lot of character in ...

Hey, Singer! ;) So I like the idea you have behind this. It's a very good message, but you also play with it very well! I really like the "Hey ...

Hi, River! Ooh, I know what you mean about the rhyme thing. I'm always rhyming with my songs for some reason. It just feels better! But there are a lot ...

MIKSTER. So apparently, this is kind of bumping an older song, and hopefully you still have a desire to receive reviews on it. Honestly, I really loved this piece. Sooo ...

Hi, Zombie! You've really got fantastic imagery, which is undoubtedly where that emotion is coming from. You had some really great moments, too, with the way you phrase certain lines ...