JabberHut

I love your dragon art so muuuch. They always make me so happy to see, and this one is just so vibrant and beautiful.

Ahhh, I love how we get to see the state of the Wind Talons now!! I like how it mirrors what happened to them in the ice talon kingdom, but ...

I really like the feel of this chapter. I know we've been in Zoltar's head now for a few chapters (if you will), but this is one of the better ...

OHHHHHHHHHHHH I love how you set this up!! Introducing this scenario of Zoltar struggling to find his flame is SUCH a great way to already introduce conflict in the story. ...

The imagery here is just so breathtaking. Your descriptions are once again On Point. It was so lovely to read, so descriptive and easy to picture. I love that we ...

I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING but I'm worried that the novel is almost over. So first off, I totally see that list of dragons that I had mentioned last ...

Hiiiii! I'm baaaaack! It's tough jumping back into a novel after a break, so forgive me if I become forgetful about details. Fortunately, I think this chapter is pretty straightforward ...

Aleth is just a nasty piece of work and I get more and more furious how he gets away with everything . I don't see Myrond getting out of this ...

OKAY THIS BINDER . Gosh I love this binder. The symbolism behind it is SPOT ON and I am so proud of you for this. Aleth's control is vast, it's ...

HELLO! I really like this development here regarding the language history. It's really good motivation to utilize for your characters, and it gives a lot more depth to the political ...

Oh, this is exciting!! First of all, I reeeally like how you showed the tension in this chapter. I feel like you pretty accurately displayed everyone's emotions in this scenario. ...

HERRO!! I'm glad Shriken is stopping everything to point this out. I was just talking about this last chapter, so yay!! It was strange that he called it a patrol ...

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I love this so much! Your characters are so wonderful here!! You just about broke my heart when the narration mentioned the upcoming blood ceremony and I just. //sob ...

Ohhh man, I can't help but worry that we're still building up to something baaad. Like, okay, WHAT HAPPENED TO EMERALD AND SHIRAKU?? What if the Wind Talons got in ...

Hey, Phoenix!! I'm really sorry for jumping in so late in the novel. I'd be happy to go back from the beginning to review later on, however, if you're still ...