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Re: Characters for a Potential Story
Hey, Winny!! Let's check out your characters. :D As a side note, this definitely feels more like a thread for the Writer's Corner forum, rather than the literary section of ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Deleted
Hey, Doss! I've noticed you're revising Eagle Times and were looking for readers. Sorry I wasn't here sooner! I love the concept here! It has a Guardians of Ga'Hoole feel ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 7.3
AHHHH I love her already. I cannot tell exactly what age range she's in, but she's definitely acting the part of a jealous sister as Dorrea had said earlier. She ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 20
awwwww omg I love this little mascara moment. Julia's thinking about Ella still and it's so bittersweet and just. so real. omg did Imogen and Maryam use the downstairs bathroom ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Nine
omg this GUY. Does he NOT have things to do?? Considering the fact Aleth never made a presence at the palace for Ky to see, I'd imagine his stay would ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 12.2)
I'M CRYING. the dragon is so cuuuuuute and so beautifullll omg I want one so bad she is so pretty
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 12.1)
I'M BACK. I have missed this but work has eaten me alive and I fought as hard as I could BUT NOW I AM HERE LET IS GOOOO I feel ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 19.2
SHE GOT A PUPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY omg what a CUTIE I WANT ONE OF MY OWN Random thought that Julia probably would've recognizd her mother's voice at least by the accent. ALSO ...
Jan 22, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Eight
Oh now this was lovely! This was a moment we really needed. I like that we're continuing where we left off in the previous chapter, so we can dive more ...
Jan 21, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Seven
HNNNNNNNNG this man is disgusting and I want him eliminated. Anyone who calls this fun needs to be detained. like UGH. THIS GUY. He's very smart, clearly, and mentally sharp. ...
Jan 21, 2020 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Five
Things are moving so fast! It really built up quick to a fast-paced chase scene. Zoltar really handled Emerald and Felistia pretty dang well. I was super impressed, like normally ...
Jan 17, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 7.2
She's just as sweet as I thought she'd be!! I really like her. Considering you haven't given her much thought before, she's already shaping up to be Buck's mother. She's ...
Jan 16, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Six
I will burn Aleth alive. And then douse him in water aND DO IT ALL AGAIN. UGH okay. So I like that we get another glimpse into Ky's normal life. ...
Jan 15, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 11)
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAN ROWAN'S BRAIN IS WORKIN'. holy cow this was SUCH a great Rowan segment. I super appreciated all the music jargon thrown in there. It made me want to ...
Jan 15, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Five
Ahhhhhh hello Mr Rifkin I love you so much. This is such a good time for a break from Aleth. Your pacing has been phenomenal! Poor thing has had a ...
Jan 14, 2020
