JabberHut

Woot, chapter 5. :D Or part 5...I dunno, you're confusing me. :lol: I just critique. :wink: After Dante was safely in jail, the cop had given him two things. [colon] ...

Oh great, now I have to match Aet's crit? :? Lol, kidding, kidding...I'll try to catch whatever Aet missed. :wink: Btw, you can keep editing your post instead of double-posting, ...

Hey, Woz! Wuz up? (Haha, I'm so funny...) Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I was way too tired to even trust myself to write a critique. It was ...

Lol, ya'll do know you can discuss through PM, right? It'll be much better, since this isn't a discussion thread. :wink: Anyway, let's see what happens next. ^^ The most ...

Woz! What up, dawg? Done, seriously. :lol: Alrighty, I'm gonna rip, and I'm gonna tear, and I'm gonna smile the entire time. :D “Dark or milk?” the receptionist at ‘The ...

Hello again! ^_^ Oh boy. :shock: I follow two very long critiques...hopefully I won't repeat anything. :wink: As he turned around, he feared the sight that would greet him would ...

Hey, Alice! I would have gotten to this about three hours sooner if my parents didn't kidnap me. ^^ I'm really sorry. I'll make it up to you by giving ...

Hello, Volant! I shall crit this to the best of my ability. I might freak out a little, though, seeing as you trust me with something so serious. :shock: However, ...

Hello! Wonderful to meet you, Aedomir. ^^ Mind if I take a peek at what you've written? I didn't think so. :wink: Before I begin: I'm gonna rip, tear, and ...

Hey, Madd! Before I begin: I'm gonna rip, tear, and smile the whole time, so fair warning. :wink: “Dose [s]any one[/s] anyone have a light?” I asked , taking a ...

Hello, R. J. Hoffman. ^^ Thought I'd stop by and see what you are willing to present to us. (I'm gonna rip, tear, and smile the whole time :)) Forgive ...

Hello! Just here to rip, tear, and smile. :D Anything that would have taken me out of my schedule would have done, [delete comma] [s]just[/s] something. ...not a thrilling thing ...

Yodles! You don't know me, but it don't hurt to meet new people. :wink: As I read this, I'm gonna rip it, tear it, and smile the entire time. :D ...

Hello, lin! ^^ You probably don't know me. Call me what you wish (as long as it's appropriate :wink:). I notice you have no reviews yet...I call first dibs! :D ...

Hey, Mad! Thought I'd pay your work a visit. :wink: Memories filled my head of her, rendering my endorphin release useless. Memories of her filled my head... :D "You idiot. ...