JabberHut

Let's see how fast I can get this crit typed. I never got to it yesterday *feels bad* and I have to leave for school in fifteen/twenty minutes. ^^; First, ...

Hello, 3B! Sorry I didn't have this up yesterday. It was out of reach. :red: But here it is! :D Zek was snoring beside her, [no comma] on the rug. ...

Greetings, Suz, m'dear! ^_^ “Because I don’t care.” She dug in her purse for another cigarette and, [no comma] ignored him. That's the only punctuation/grammar error I found. Her red ...

Here upon request. :) If I repeat anything, I'm very sorry. ^^ (First attempt at Fantasy. Gulps!) Well, good luck! :D Here goes nothin'... I scream out, [no comma] and ...

Hey, Razzle! I had this crit for about twenty-four hours and already six people reviewed. XD I'm a slow rear, but heck, I'm postin' anyway. You deserve it! :D The ...

Sorry, I have no idea what to say. xD She's speechless 'cause it's so amazing. :wink: I thought it was wonderful, 3B. There's just one thing I'd like to point ...

Hello, sorry for the wait. My school decided I should work more than critique. :lol: So I'm doing this at school! :wink: "Leave me alone, Kochi…" she snapped, [period instead] ...

Hello again! Sorry for the wait, my school decided I should stop posting/critting on YWS and do homework instead. Good times.. *sarcasm* Anyway, I'm posting this up at school so ...

Yodles! ^_^ Seridon raised his hand to the steed’s saddle, and [s]then [/s]reached out for the tanned leather sack alongside it. I usually try to avoid using then in this ...

Hello, Volant! I'll try not to repeat anything people said, but I can't promise, unfortunately. *is tired* Anyway! Paco stood over the cowering figure, [no comma?] who shrank away with ...

Hello, Alice! Thought I'd stop by your work. ^_^ Finally she found a kid, no older than 18 , walking along the highway. “Need a ride , kid?” she asked. ...

Hello, Rieda! Thought I'd pay a visit to your work. I was actually looking for a fantasy to read, and I saw your piece. ^_^ Taneantra’s hand groped the air ...

Hello! Woo, you got Andy to critique. Nice! :wink: Now I won't have to worry about a whole lot. :lol: The boar stood , [?] leaning heavily against a thick ...

Hello! Here's the critique for you! :) And indeed I do, [period instead] “Jacques!” I squeal, jerking away as though I’ve been burned. Once I’ve secured myself upon the sheets, ...

Hello! ^^ I critiqued your work, but a lot of people beat me to posting. :lol: I'll try not to repeat any and, if I do, I'll only elaborate. :D ...