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Re: A Broken Promise
Hello, Claire Snoad! Welcome to YWS, and I hope you've made yourself at home here. It looks like you are [or maybe you're not] aware of the review ratio. Two ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: What A Disguise Love Is.
Rose! Oh man, I'm critting one of your poems? Yours? An amazing poet's? :lol: Let's see what I can do for you! ^_^ they steal me away. It is no ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Song of Shallow Waters III: Storm's Edge
Hey, Lynlyn! I read the previous three parts as well, and your story is very enjoyable! You had me hooked the entire time! I didn't even look at the clock, ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1-The Queen
Hey, Derek! Grammar I'm going to skip the grammar/spell check 'cause my eyes are killing me today. T_T I can come back and give you a sentence-by-sentence if you'd like ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: A Shiny Reddish Colour (Edited 6/3)
Hello, Fart, dear! :D Let's see... Ew, you're description of the scalped guy was fantastic. I definitely had a clear visual, and it really disgusted me, lol. Good job with ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 5 (Part Two)
I told you I'd do this! I'm sooo sorry I put it off for sooo long! I feel so bad! :smt089
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 3 (Revised)
I'm back! This looks pretty long again. Hopefully I'll get it finished, but my eyes my blow up on me halfway through. Grammar and First Impressions Sierra ran aimlessly, [s]just[/s] ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 2 (Revised)
Hello again, Vernon! Grammar and First Impressions Laid on the table was no banquet, just pittance, [no comma] compared to what their boss had. Yet it was a time of ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1 Revised
Hey, Vernon! I never actually read your story, so I'm kind of excited! :D Grammar and First Impressions The enclosure erupted with noise, [no comma] while the stands reverberated with ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Queen of Hearts
Wow, Ahoy! This was really good! Not gonna lie! I think I know what you mean by it. I definitely got the first part of it, then I hit the ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 5 (Part One)
Wow, I was late to this one. Didn't notice it was up 'til five minutes ago! :oops: I tried to interrupt her , but she wouldn’t let me. Pulling my ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: Memento Mori (Edited)
Fart! This isn't really that bad. There were some spelling/grammar issues I spotted. I can come back and check that if you'd like, but because of limited time, I'll skip ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Life
Hello! I'm not much of a poet myself, but hopefully I'll say something worth noting, lol. Eimear has taking care of the punctuation for me. My only concern was the ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: You're on in Five
Hello, Sock! Here upon request and desire, of course! ^_^ To me, it was just another way of dirtying up a piece of clothing and securing another chore you had ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Revolution...
Hello again! Thought I'd stop by, seeing as this is a homework assignment. I'll do what I can to help you out? What class is this for? It looks quite ...
May 20, 2008
