JaBurton

Hi! I hope you like my review and that I don't sound harsh (I'm not trying to be, I swear)! So... this is a really good start to a poem. ...

This is a very sound start to a poem. Forewarning, I might sound a bit rude. So... I'm all for rhyme but it was a bit too much for me ...

Hey! So this was a really good start to a story (it says 1, so I'm assuming there's more). I love the language and imagery you offer because it grounds ...

WARNING: I realize that I sound really rude below so I'd like to tell you that when the Creative Writers did a colab. with the Singer-Songwriters here at my school ...

Can I just say that this writing style is wonderful? It reminds me of when I first got into reading YA; words that had a sophistication to them while still ...

I love this poem simply for it's small length and simplicity. What's more is that most of the lines are pretty easy to follow and the patter you tried to ...

WARNING: I might sound rude below. Please know that I don't mean it! I'm a very technically analytic person so I don't go so much into the story as the ...

WARNING: I might come across as rude so I'd like to apologize in advance. Hi! I really liked this chapter and want to read the rest, but since I haven't ...

Pre-Warning: I probably sound rude below this... sorry, I'm not trying to be. I just wanna help make your poetry as good as it can be. I like the structure ...

I like this, I really do, but there are some technical things which I feel I should point out. 1) When using a semicolon, it connects two complete sentences. "A ...

First and foremost I would like to say you are very descriptive but not smothering, so it's easy to get into your story and follow it. Secondly I would like ...

I'm only really focusing on the major technical aspects, just so you know. That being said, I am a bit of a hypocrite because I have the same tendencies in ...

I liked this. Not because it was deep or anything. No, it's simply because this is a simple statement of fact in poetry. I don't feel as if there is ...

BEFORE YOUR READ THIS: Please note that this review isn't really looking so much into how I like the story (which I did, just so you know), but the technical ...