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Re: Abkhazia, Resolute [introduction]
Before I Read Hey Sam! Here's the first critique for winning my Side Characters Contest. Honestly, this should be counted as four, since you sent me the new version with ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
Here's your first of three critiques for third place in my Side Characters contest! Nit-Picks It’s my best friend because it’s mine. You say this, but then you never expand ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Diamonds
Hey Azila! I just felt like critiquing some of my friend's work, so you're up! This was the newest piece I could find, so I hope it's of some help ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Tangled Up In Blue
Nit-Picks The asshole comes in wearing a suit. With a tie, and everything. Ditch the comma. And what's with the sudden POV swith? First we were with Cal, now Tom? ...
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: Tangled Up In Blue
*Insert un-needed opener here* Nit-Picks In fact, I have to say that it’s bit unnerving, actually. Use either 'in fact' or 'actually,' but not both. No girl got be Huh? ...
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: Tangled Up In Blue
Hey Icaruss! Here's the promised (and very late) critique! Nit-Picks Remember when you told me that—? No, well, of course you don’t. Sorry, silly question. It’s just that I always ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Runner
*Glee* You never have short pieces, Con! My stuck-on-vacation-mode brain thanks you. So, here comes the much delayed but promised critique! Nit-Picks I want to stop; Why's he want to ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Gypsie Eyes: prologue and chapter one
Gryf! I have finally come to give you the promised critique – I'm so sorry about the wait. Prologue Instead their eyes were focused on the frail boy who sat ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Crazy Little Thing I
*Takes a deep breath, then screams:* Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr iiiiiiiiiii
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: God Still Loves You (5)
Well, my contest is finally over, so I can critique this! You did an excellent job – I haven't read these in ages, yet I remembered it all right away. ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: The Ultimatum
The ( Side Characters ) contest has finally ended, and here is your critique! Anyways, I think I'll explain how I am scoring this before I read further than the ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Renegades
The ( Side Characters ) contest has finally ended, and here is your critique! Anyways, I think I'll explain how I am scoring this before I read further than the ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: On End
The ( Side Characters ) contest has finally ended, and here is your critique! Anyways, I think I'll explain how I am scoring this before I read further than the ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Diggin' for Gold
The ( Side Characters ) contest has finally ended, and here is your critique! Anyways, I think I'll explain how I am scoring this before I read further than the ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Fairytales Don't Exist
The ( Side Characters ) contest has finally ended, and here is your critique! Anyways, I think I'll explain how I am scoring this before I read further than the ...
Jul 13, 2008