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thanks, I really appreciate that. :)

Hey guys, I've not been here in a long time but I feel my writing has improved somewhat since I departed maybe a year or two ago, thought I'd just ...

This really makes me think, just because it's quite confusing, but I like that. The one thing I don't like about this is the last line: "of knowledge, nonsense and ...

Okay. This is odd. I'm shocked and yet I still enjoyed the reading. But still... what? It's good and the rhymes aren't too predictable, I like it. But I can't ...

Brilliant, I can feel anger in your words but also despair. The two characters are incredibly well defined, you've made a few errors, for example you said 'will' when you ...

Please delete. Please delete.Please delete.Please delete. Please delete. Please delete.

That's really why I dislike writing poetry. Especially rhyming. I've never cared for stanzas, truthfully, I just write. Thanks for your input ancientforever. I'll perhaps take this down and revise ...

Enjoyable, one grammatical mistake. You said breathe when you meant breath. Other than that, a good poem. A little bit annoying with the odd cases of rhyming then not rhyming, ...

May I suggest you just copy and paste your story on to here? As you have joined today, you may be considered untrustworthy and people will hesitate to download the ...

We die with ourselves as nothing can’t remember. one tiny grammatical error in that line There's no error.

Okay, Thanks!