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The thing is, it's not so much a journal that she's writing. It's a story, a philosophy actually. I read one of my dads philosophy books (boring as hell, wouldn't ...

Thanks Alainna =D I really appreciate that you continue to read these, I really do. Yeah, alike does sound kinda outta place, I'll drop it. =D Thanks for the crit! ...

Tha'd be cool. I would read it, most definently. If you do continue it, PM me, this was awesome. =D -JC

Cor. Lumme. Lawks. Raxacollikophallabatoriaxe This made me giggle...I just wish I knew what it meant... =D -JC

hehe, opps...where is that? I'm used to writing everything in second person, I'm gradually introducing myself to third (with this), and even second...which was a bit of a failure....*tears* Anyways, ...

No, it's okay. You got it right. I guess, the narrator of the story wasn't staying with him because she felt it was her 'feminine duty', it was because she ...

Oh god. That's a huge block of text....seriously. Double space between paragraphs, and I'll come back and read it. -JC

Why would you want her to leave him? (this is just a question to the reader for my own learning purposes, please answer as truthfully as you can)

Where does the new stuff for chapter two start?

Merci, Jesise =D I'm glad you enjoyed it. -JC

Yeah, I really want to publish this one when it's finished. My first attempt at publishing a book (illusions) well....lets just just say it didn't quite work out. So I'm ...

Eh, whether it is or isn't, it still gives me something to think about =D I guess this was supposed to be a tad depressing...less of a story than just ...

Being through something helps, a lot. I've actually never been through Jamie's situation (thank goodness), but writing it is surprisingly easy, even to fit in all the emotion. Some of ...

It's supposed to be repeditive. Like, how it was in the beginning, what happened to create change, and then how in the end, nothing had changed at all...

toast out of the toasted Toaster? The moment I opened the door to outside, the sun hit me like razor blades. I cringed, and then put my head up to ...