IzumiRyuichi

I will review this later because I can't right now. But I suggest you change those giant paragraphs into more smaller ones.

Hey, You told me you changed is... so I read it. It's better this time and I enjoyed it even more. Keep up the awesome work! But I have one ...

I like the edit. Keep up the good work!

That is true. But for now, I need your help in what happens next. (I'll talk to you on xfire)

Hey Rain! Thanks for coming. I'm happy you have come from the dead, at least a little bit... But hey, we tried. I can edit the grammar soon and perfect ...

You do that! And also, could I ask you a favor? If you have the time, I need some reviews on my Romance Fantasy. I'm new to romance so I ...

I can't really review this.... but I can say its good. I don't quite know what its about, but I like it. Great job.

Well thank you LoVeLeSs. I'll be writing the next chapter and ending that torture. Also, here are the answers to your questions- He slept on the bench because his body ...

Hey natalie. Sorry, but I decided not to continue this. I'm actually working on a romance being helped by my 17 year old friend RainWanderer. It will definitely be more ...

I know I shouldn't be spamming this thread, but I have a quick question. Have you watched Chobits? I noticed Chi was your avatar.

Thank you guys for your help. I will make sure to improve on the next chapters