Chapter 1: Adventure?
The figure wore a black trench coat, hiding his face from the world and the light from filling him within. The figure sat in the chair as he talked with dark hateful meaning in his voice; he called to the minions to come to him. They ran to him with a jumping like rhythm, they came to a halt and put both their hands behind their backs, looking straight forward to their master. The figure looked at the table in front of him as he began to talk “you know you’re jobs, get to it and make sure its dead!” he said in a stern voice of power. The minions quickly jumped back turning in the same rhythm as before and left into the realm of death.
While in so called home Balla woke up screaming as tears ran down her face as her body trembled in fear. She didn’t know what happened, did she have a bad dream? She shook her head in disbelief she could not remember anything. She looked around her bed seeing nothing different as the normal stuff animals were there, pillows an stuffed animals surrounding her ready to attack any minute…well she wishes, she sighed an looked at them. She looked at her purple and green poke a dotted dragon “oh come on please a little excitement would be nice…bite me” she looked to the dragon as it just stared at her with mocking blue beady eyes. “Thanks” she said with sarcasm in her voice, she rolled her eyes as she climbed out of her bed feeling the blood from her head rush to her legs making her stumble picking herself up quickly. Her bleach blond hair covered her face leaving her blind for a moment till she brushed it behind her ear reviling her teal blue eyes that left most people breathless. She looked to her mirror as her porcelain skin glowed in the rising sunlight that came from her window as it showed to be 6:00 am in morning. she took her already placed cloths off her chair an began to put them on starting with her most comfortable underwear. She made her way to her shirt an jeans that fit her body perfectly showing her big round hips an her hour glass figure. She was perfect....well thats what everyone told her, she was pure beauty from a royal family that came from a beautiful family but the thing was.The thing is that she didn't get was that her family was normal. She always looked at them then herself wondering what went wrong an why she was like this an her family wasn't but her mom an dad never told her of being adopted they should of told a sixteen year old by now her that she was adopted right. But she still kept thinking it was weird, she told herself that every morning when she looked at herself in the mirror seeing her teel blue eyes. The final touch was her black an neon green converse, she looked herself in the mirror once more as she smiled leaving everything else behind in her room till she returned after school. She walk through the vines that hung from her door way an landed on the floor oh so gracious. She left the vines to fall back into place clinking together sparling in the sunlight and shielding the bedroom behind. She walked into the front room that was dark but held one light on, the over lamb that hung from on the ceiling. She looked to the office that was just beyond the front room where her mom an dad stood talking behind the closed doors. She walked to them as she waited to leave to walk to school, school was thirty minutes away. Before she reached the office she heard her dad with a harse tone in his voice talking to her mom,as she got closer to the door her dads voice got louder an angrier. She stopped in mid-walk an stood still infront of the closed doors of hell waiting for her. She looked down to the shoes that stood still not moving leaving a imprint in the carpet showing of the dreadful awating thing that will happen once those doors open. Balla took two steps back and put her head down as a tear drop fell to the carpet, Ballas family had a lot of problems with money her mom an dad were fighting pracicly ever day as they fought about everything about if they were going to have food or even be in a house in a week or two. She left through the front door to the world that awaited her she slowly walked out leaving her parnets behind to talk about the future and what lies ahead for the whole family. What did hold for the whole family she thought but then forgot the thought an went on to the sidewalk that lead the way to school to escape the dreadfull house of lose hope. She took her first turn that held houses full of wonder one house was pink an full of flower bushes that held all the colors of flowers there could be. Balla stared at that house that was set to be three four one seven Bloom Ave "how ironic" she said wondering if in her imaginif head if there a was forest full of flowers like that, that you would get lost an the only way of getting out was by the flowers colors of the rainbows pattern that lead the way out. She now crossed a big dessert that had much memories to her like the first snow day since two thousand six an present day was two thousand ten. She looked around to make sure no cars came fast to end her life that day and that second. She crossed the street an turned a quick right then a quick left leading into houses surrounded by gates keeping the world out an never letting it in. After leaving the dull an lifeless alone neighborhood she came to a big street an big side walks that held big groups as large as five people when walking home talking about shit that will never be mentioned again. She loved that sidewalk because when her an big group of friends walked together they didn't have to split up to talk an walk, she was silly to think this but it was true an she hated spilting up when ever she thought about this subject she just shook her head an laughed at herself. She took a left an went onto another street then another right then another left seeing her school in the distance, Infierno High. Hispanic people always laughed when they saw the title of her school she never knew why an she was always to lazy to look up what the word ment. She got closer an closer till she saw the sign that stated Infierno HighSchool, she disliked school very much, he mom hated her saying she hated it so she told her to say she disliked. She disliked it very very much she didn't like how there was homework an teachers but she always got really good grades she was a three point five student. She walked into school grounds an headed straight to where her an her friends meet in the morning, her friends were sitting on the rail where they hung out. Her group was pretty large but there was the sections that kept to themself it was only sometimes they all were in a conversation together. She reached the group and hugged, waved, and told everyone hi as that was the normal routine in the morning of everyday. Balla sat on a rail by her friend Cyrus or so she called Citrus, she had brown hair with pale brown skin with gold eyes. They called her Citrus because Citrus an Cyrus were so close together they all just liked calling her the funnier thing. Balla sat looking at the ground feling her whole body just dead as she still felt sleepy and emotional from hearing her parnets. Zach tapped her on shoulder looking her straight into her teal blue eyes as she saw his lighting brown eyes, he had a soft baby face as he spoke "hey Balla did you do your homework?". Balla thought for a second then started to move when Zach said "stop" Balla froze before she was even able to jump off the rail, "i will get it" he said with kindness in his voice. "Where is the homework" he seacrched through her backpack with hesitation looking like something was going to attack him, "in the blue folder" she smiled and laughed at him as he sighed in relief and got the homework. "Thanks Balla your a life saver" "Anytime Zach just do your homework next time" she smiled and began to look at the floor again when Carmax her best friend fianlly got to school. she always got to school realy late "Carmax!" she grinned an ran up to her squeezing her in a big hug as carmax squeezed back as hard even harder, she was always stronger then Balla. Carmax was a really beautiful milky black with shocking blue eyes for a african american, she had the biggest smile imagineable and a comic laugh that could make any one laugh even her. After there year long hug or so it felt like Carmax shouted "PIRO!!" the word shot through Balla like a silver bullet and it felt so good. Piro was a band that Carmax an Balla loved an they where playing in two days in the sadium in there town an they had front row tickets. Balla an Carmax went on talking about the cencert and the daily goods that came with being a teenager, they waked to there first period which was science, the fun fun class to blow stuff up. Thier Chemistry teacher was crazy but fun as hell and was usually not there so more fun to goof off she loved school sometimes. They had a subatute once again as Balla and Carmax just sat talking and making origami with yellow cardbord paper they found on the table, Carmax made a bird representing free an small to hide, Balla made a panda representing cute an cuddly but mess with it and it will bite off your head. She always called herself a panda so did her friends, it just fit her personality. Balla parted ways with Carmax and headed to the girls locker room, P.E. (Physical Education). The class that every freshman an sophmore has to take, Balla was fithteen years old old...just a sophmore trying to survive drama and boys. You know the usual teenage life. She entered seeing all girls gossiping like crazy hyhinas chatting away about probably the girl dressing right nest to them. Balla chatted away herself with Anabell talking about Zach and Reyes who waited for them everyday after they dress into their P.E. cloths, Shorts and P.E. shirt that said "Infierno High P.E. class of 2011". They walked out of the locker room with arms linked like chain monkeys but then again they weren't blue or monkeys. Balla giggled to the thought of being blue chain monkeys and link with any other blue chain monkey. They both saw the group as so did Zach an Reyes saw them, Zach and Reyes imediatly started horse playing playing with each other like usual being guys and trying to impress them. Reyes is a big sweet and cuddly guy, tall and strong as a wrestler. Reyes had short black hair with big eyes like a puppy looking at a little girl with a lollypop, she called reyes puppy all the time because he acts so much like one. For being a big guy he was such a puppy with a big sense of humor and gets on your nerves just like a puppy but a past of a criminal. They smiled at Balla and Anabell as they stopped horse paying and waved with each other hanging off each other by their arms looking like bestes buddies which they were. Balla an Anabell both had a thing for Zach an Reyes and same vise versa, they were the main thing they talked about in the locker room an V.I. (Visual Imagery). Then there was Jeremian who is a punk noy with piercing and even a tattoo that was amazinly beautiful. He was the most perverted and raises person she had ever meet but she loved him, he was a really good friend. He had red dyed hair with strips of green that formed a mohawk. Then Danny or so we called Coon Coon because he looked like a raccon an acted like one, he was quiet but yet very evil due to his personality of a puppet master watching peoples actions an laughing at people troubles. Balla loved him thoough he was a good friend to talk to an he wasn't so mean to her an Anabell, he was always interesting. He only really cares about his ex that broke up with him because she had to move away and it would be to hard on them so she is always on his mind an thats the only thing stopping him being his puppet master way. Today was play any sport day, there usual game was tennis which was three on three. They lost balls, laughed and having a great time like any day in P.E. P.E. was over an they came out of the locker room an saw everyone leaving from the locker like rushing dogs being trapped together in a cage wanting so badely to get out. Balla walked with Coon Coon talking about the assignment thats for there next class which was English and they had to do a five paragraph essay. Balla zoned ut leaving Coon Coon to talk to himself as she watch the kids walk past her, she thought of what would happen if a zombie break-out would happen. Whould she be able to kill her friends that get affected/ Coon Coon finished talking as they reached the class and she said "well hope our essay are good" Balla an Coon Coon sat together taking there seats that felt like being in a mini car. Balla put her feet on the car infront of her as she sloched back getting comfortable for boring english notes that Mrs. Valentine, a middle age, short, and brown hair women with a voice that was so mono tone. Balla could just fall into a deep sleep like a sleepy caby. Bala sat taking notes nodding off and on, the class began to some to a end when Balla was deep in thought like usual thinking about boys, school, the usual stuff. Balla was runed by thought, everything was followed after a thought with her, Balla is a shy type but once you get to know her she is fun loveing person. She will even tell people once they know her well enough stuff that you wouldn't even want to know. When ever she can mess with teachers she will, its not that she is a bad person she just loves to mess with them an its so easy. Balla was a slacker but always seemed to get her work down at the last minute and she still manage to keep life straight she just a had a ideal perfectness to her that she could not understand. Mrs. Valentine saw Balla drifting off in thought, "Balla read this passage about? and analize it." she pointed to the notes on bored. She looked at the bored then again agian getting lost in thought of what to say when the bell rang, a big smile ran accross her face "saved by the bell" she grinned with bright white smile. Balla started walking out of the room when she looked at her teacher as she just stared probably thinking to herself you won this battle for now" as Balla thought "hahaha i won i didn't have to answer" Balla smiled with a evil grin walking out of the room with a proud walk. She thought that all in her head as if she won the battle Mrs. Valentine will probably just get her tomorrow and give her lots of homework. She shook her head an put it down "more work" she whispered out loud as Carmax tapped her on shoulder making her come out of thought. "Balla how did english go?" Carmax straight out said it "I pissed Mrs. Valentine off again" She gigled as she said it. Carmax sighed and said "oh come on Balla she hates me enough because of you" Balla shrugged her shoulders an said "sorry, it was just funny and the bell rang when she gave me a question and she got mad for no reason I didn't so it this time I promise". She looked at Carmax with innocent eyes "ok Balla but I am going to get it in fith period, you know that right", Balla shook her head yes and walked into fourth period which was Math, "god i hate Math" Carmax pointed out, everyday Balla or Carmax said that.They took turns it was jsut something they did, they walked in an took their seats next to Zach who loved math and was good at it. They started on the class work that was on the bored, after twenty minutes Zach poked Balla "I am done" he said "really, you are to smart" she sighed looking at the five problems out of ten done.
Dear Carmax, My parents were fighting again this morning but whatever it happens every day. PIRO!!!! Oh ya we need to plan for Piro, meet me after school at my house, I am stopping at seven eleven to get us MONSTERS!!! HEHE…so I will be taking a different route home so you get a ride and I will meet you there. Love Balla/Royality…not ^_^ P.S. Can’t wait for PIRO!!
Carmax took the note and read it it then turned her head looking to Balla nodding her head. Balla and Carmax looked at their work again and sighed in with dreary eyes just staring at the work not wanting to do it. Balla started wondering off into thought again thinking now about how her mom was, she was probably crying at home. She quickly shook her head trying not to think of that as tear formed in her eyes, she put her head down and began to cry soaking her jacket sleeve with tears. She looked up eyes blood shot while she rugged them dry leaving her lips most with tears and her cheeks pale with a glossy look with still that same beauty everyone loved. Zach looked up with lazy eyes from sleeping the whole period of finishing his work so damn early, he glanced towards Balla seeing her red eyes looking like she just cried. The bell rings letting Balla catch her breath and feel relief to go to lunch. Balla, Carmcax, and Zach walked out of the class of numbers and riddles of lies an torucherment, they reached the table at lunch. Balla got her lunch which was a hambuger with cheese, her favorite food, she at done eating as Reyes came and slid next to her waving fraticly as she giggled waving back. She finished her food then facing her attention to Reyes “Reyes how you been?” she poked him twice “good just been busy with school and sister being annoying and evil” “hehe all sisters are suppost to be like that” “no there not well maybe but she is really bad” “you are a good brother” Balla patted his head like a dog and got up and started to mingle around the group talking to everyone at least once. Balla looked around to her surroundings of all the differnt groups of friends that hung out together as she imagined what group could possibly be talking about. Zach tapped her on the shoulder as she slowly turned around he pulled her into a hug that was full of meaning as it lasted at least a minute, it described so much. Balla felt their bodies press together so warm and caring that she began to cry their bodies sperated leaving a gap of emptyness. Her world just fell violelty, her falling to the ground quickly being caught by Reyes picking her up with one arm looking her straight in the eyes, his eyes full of scared and nervousness as he held her in his arms. She fell into a deep concouis that took over her body feeling like there was no meaning for waking up at all, she slowly woke up from her slumber dreary and hopeless full of thpught in her head of what made that become of her. She looked disoriented as she talked “what happened” she looked at the nurse that leaned over her while Carmax was poking her head . Balla gave off a slit giggle, the nurse took her tempetature and asked her lots of questions as Carmax told her she passed out after crying and not sure what made her pass out in the first place. Balla just thought to herself, was it caused by stress, the though made her sick was stress able to have such a great effect, she rubbed her eyes and felt tears but noticed blood making her face full of fear filling with horror making her eyes widen with disbelief. She quickly wipped them away as the nurse started to tak to her again, the nurse strongly disapproved going to fith period but Balla begged to go getting on her knees like a monk praying to the gods, she let her go and sent Balla and Carmax on there way to history. The reason for wanting to go to history was that it was her favorite and they were talking about kings and queens, thats always been her favorite thing to read about, she wished that she was royality and a princess, it was wish since she was young. They walked into class late as Mr. Mac was talking and reading out of the book, she took her seat and class went by reading and taking notes as Mr. Mac said “Balla read this journal out loud from Tanzen Spiele I think you like it” Balla looked at the material and started to read “I Tanzen Spiele write this due to my family being under royality, my mother being Queen Liebe Spiele and my father being King Kunst Spiele. I am of beauty and kindness, I live under my families rules and lives. Things aren't going so great, a wars going on and my parents have no idea what to do and my life is threatened and I heard my parnets talking about me haveing to go somewhere and stay there for a long time. But the thing is that i don't know where that is going to be and i am afraid that i will never see my parents again and even not remember myself, well i have to stop and figure this out so goodbye for a long time, hope i don't lose myself." Balla stopped reading looking at the clock as the bell rang, she had that joural stuck in her head for the rest of the day. She went to visual imagery with Anabell and did the usual taking random pictures and goofing off having fun talking about Zach and Reyes of course. The day goes by as the final bell rings for school to end, She walked out of class with a slow rythmic style while she said goodbye to Anabell. She watched all of the students go bye to like a school of fish swimming by, she started walking to the front of the school ready to go home and talk with Carmax about Piro and have monster, a smile ran accross her face of the thought. She headed off school campus walking on sidewalks hext to streets busy on a work day with everyone wanting to go home, she saw seven eleven in the distance.She walked as a sudden loud noise came behind her as she looked back as it was a car coming fast at her peeling onto the sidewalk wanting her to be dead. She thought quickly and jumped on the wall beside her that was a little shorted then her, she ran quickly along it trying to escape the car that wanted her dead. The car ran straight into the brick wall beaneth her making it fall apart as well as her, she fell to her death into the car that kept going fast till she blacked out complety leaving her world behind. Her eyes open filling like her whole body was weak she slowly rose from the ground looking around her just seeing black everywhere like the blackness never ended if you kept walking deeper and deeper into it. "This is where I end up" she mumbled getting scared out of her mind not knowing what to do and where the hell she was, a slit tap on her shoulder made her jump losing her balance falling to the ground. She looked up quickly while a dark hooded figure stood infront of her standing still as a statue, she nervously said "who are you and where am I?" she looked at the man awaiting a answer. "Do you want to be happy" the figure asked her in a musky voice as Balla was distrot but only could think of her life and how she hated it and wanted it to end, she could think of nothing else but "yes" she screamed with red tears falling down her face cleaning the dirt from her glass face. The figure just put his hand out to her, she looked at it not thinking and just grabbed it letting it consume her into a deeper darkness and realizing she was now falling from a terrible height, her body let off a shock of lighting that went through her entire body makeing it numb and weightless. She fell to a hard surface knocking out due to the blow of the hit, she awakes moments later but in a forest with a setting sun for sleep, her body was weak but she manage to get herself to sit next to a tree giving her leverage to figure things out. She falls asleep waking up to the bright sun as she rubs her eyes an d runs her hands through her hair noticing her hair longer then before thinking what happen and how long was she out. She keeps looking at her hair "what the hell are you doing" a voice above her says in a displeasing voice, she quickly puts her hair down and looks up, it was a boy he had long black stright hair that went a little longer then his ears which where slightly pointy buut enough to notice, his skin was a light carmel like on a carmel apple and his slit eyes showed a lavender purple eyes that was some what a glossy milk. The boys face went sloft and a frown appeared of worriness as he kneeled down beside her. "Are you ok?" the boy states and touches her fagile skin with blood that came from her eyes "i don't know" she said with scaredness in her voice as she rubbed the blood off her face looking down at her jeans covered in dirt "where am I?" Balla finally said after a long pause. "Kenshi Forest in Valden" she cuckled at the thought of duh there in world Valden, "whats Valden?" she said softly, he shot a glance at her with big eyes "what?" his tone went to happy to serious "well I don't think I am from here I am from Earth". The word Earth struck him like a bullet to the head "so that place is real" "yes" she replied "Awesome" "what do you mean awesome I have no where to go and i am scared as hell" she hugged her knees and started to cry. After kneeing for so long he sat by her "oh I am sorry I didn't mean it like that I just..." he paused and thought of a solution "you can come with me, i just ran away from home my parents didn't want me and i was thinking of going somewhere" he hadn't seen her face for awhile since most of the time she was looking down but when she heard that, her head shot up revealing a new set of eyes that showed off a beautiful red instead of the earlier eyes of teal blue. He looked at her in surprise "your eye color changed i have seen that before, there beautiful" "what..my eyes" he helps her up walking her over to a river revealing her eyes, Balla just looked at them in Amazement as they changed to a pumpkin yellow. She looked at them remembering he said they were beautiful and that she could go with him "thank you for calling them beautiful and really i can go with you, it can be like a adventure right?" her voice got excited and her spirit rose and she just looked at him not even realizing she was somewhere new and not knowing if she will ever get back to Earth. He looked at her and nodded his head "ya and who said it was going to be a adventure?"
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Ya I thought so I will do that next time I am just new at this and got to over my head. Sorry *sigh* I was just scared to post it but now since i put so much I feel stupied sorry again.
I will review this later because I can't right now. But I suggest you change those giant paragraphs into more smaller ones.