ItsMeNathalie

I like it! Great story with a nice conclusion! I wonder how you're poems are right now if this was just a poem you wrote for the first time. In ...

Great poem! I love the structure of your poem. It is different than a lot of other poems I read. Furthermore it tells a great story, with some emotion, which ...

I really like the poem. It is beautifully written. But I do think that the last 3 lines don't really match the poem. It is different than all the other ...

I like your poem! It is very interesting. I could find a kind of rhythm easily! Very nice. Maybe some more explenation, but on the other hand it gives a ...

I like the story in the poem, however I found it hard to find a rythm like how I should read it. The thing that caused that problem is that ...

Very beautiful poem! It reminds me of my fish who died a couple of years ago. From that day on I knew how much you could love a fish and ...

Dear friend, Then at night you die away, Into nightmares, Wake up with baggy eyes on a tear-stained pillow, Dear friend, please hear my plea, Never open your mouth again, ...