Isaac

Hey Vei! Sorry if I get nit pick sometimes by the way. The wolf from behind takes advantage and attacks first, spinning around his body and staff, striking the wolf ...

Its good, I don't have much time, so I'll say this quickly. I did have one issue, when she is done talking with John there doesn't seem to be any ...

Oh my gosh, I don't know what to say. This is amazingly well written. The other people who got to it before me have really covered all the minor issues. ...

Hey! I'll give you a review :P And while I know that you can stand a day without doing anything I just can't stat still!” I think you mean "stand". ...

I think I get what the poem is about. Least it appeals to feelings I've had before. So I really like it. Now, lets see if I can actually critique ...

Okay, so firstly. It isn't quite clear how the organization of this is set up. The writing is really good, I love the description. But it isn't quite clear what ...

Hey, so firstly. This is really good! When I was reading it I didn't feel the need for there to be more description, although you don't really give a lot ...

Hey, looks like I get the honors of first review. So I would definitely say that I like it. It flows nicely in most places, and the meaning was at ...

So, first of all, good way to get your feelings across. Interesting topic. But I think your piece is a bit melodramatic. The earth will survive, we are just killing ...

I like it. You pick a good topic, the difficulty and pain of giving up a dream. The lyrics are good, although I probably wouldn't be the best person to ...

I really like this poem, its not overly complicated. But it gets the meaning across. "ran down its face. " In this line I might suggest changing "its" to "our". ...

Its definitely a good start. The meaning could be a little clearer. I think you are saying that this person is chasing unreachable dreams. I like how you are taking ...

I thought it was good, its a tough topic to work with. It does lack some of the emotions that I might expect in it, but I think its an ...

This is really good! Its very original. As many people have said, its not a way of looking at the stars that you see very often. The fourth stanza is ...